We found our secret place,
A place where no one would
know where we are at.
We talked about things in this life
that we’ve observed.
We sat & talked about our favorite songs, our futures,
The things that hold us back,
& the dreams we haven’t slept through.
These moments created us.
They laad out heart to hug each other
when we kissed,
& flirt with each other when we hugged.
_Niran†.
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Since it has been months of writing and you have improved a lot can I ask you to write these feelings again in better words?💐
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Sure mate I’ll .
This was the starting phase of my Blogging so was not very much confident about my words & arrangements , so sure I’ll go for it
& Glad that ur showering ur love to my writings
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You think well but can you make it more rhyming. It would sound really nice.
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Well sure , just the beginning,but try m best to get it in a flow & thnx
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