My father said
he was sorry
he had to hit me
but I was just so bad
he didn’t know what
else to do.
I asked him if he
ever tried
to use his words?
He held out his hands,
forged by violence,
& whispered
that he didn’t know how..
_Niran†.
.
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🎀Happy Blogging 🎀
Sad! Very
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Yeah mate just experienced that !!
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I’m an irregular blogger, started just this year.
And I cannot ever write something so tragic and so beautiful at the same time.
My favourite of yours! Have been going through all since evening!
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Awwwwwwwwwwwww 💫 ur words dear 🙌🙌🙌 . Glad to have you in mi zone
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Really looking forward to your other blogs and would love your take on my works.
Happy blogging to you! 😀
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Sure mate I’ll look into ur pieces as soon as possible
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Hard hitting…
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Yeaaaaaaaa 😉,hope u enjoyed mi small piece
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Yes .. said so much in so little…
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😊✌️
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Nice one..!
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Thank you 😊🎀 hope you loved it 😉
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Yaaah!!!😍 i hope the same..
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😉🤙hope!!!!!
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Ohh God. I’m lucky in this case. I wasn’t beaten up a single time by my dad my whole life. Good kid! 😂
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Ohh dats gr8 . Good luck in future mate😂😉
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Haha, ✌ 😂
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Ouch!
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🤔
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Wowww…..It’s sooooo deep….
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Thank you Tamizhan , hope u loved it 😊🎀
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Welcome Nirant😉😉😉
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😂😂
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😍😍😍
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😃
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😍
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Welcome dear😊
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😍😉
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Intense….poem
Nirant 👍
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Thank you sushma ✌️ for ur sweet words 💛
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Bad memories
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Yea 😵😊
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😔
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U r luking nervous 🤔
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No not really
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Okay , don’t take it seriously dear ☺️
It’s just a poem 😊
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💃
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Hahaha lolz nice moves😂
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😊
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Great job buddy👍🏻
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Thank you mate , I hope u enjoyed mi short piece😉✌️
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Oh God, This gave me chills! It is painful, very moving. Great work, Nirant.
-Firefly 🐝
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Thank you Firefly 🐝 🤝😊, means a lot 👍
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Awesome poem Nirant
U r very good in writing poems😋
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Thank you 😊🎀
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