Maybe one day
you & I will be together,
in a place
where the sun tickles
our faces,
Where the rain invites us to dance.
A place that does not ask us
to be anything more
than we already are,
A place where the words
we have searched for_
yearned to say,
are simple.
_Niranβ .
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Simple yet to the point
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Yess dear straight on point !!
Thank you so much Nisha π€
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Direct kool
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Koool βΊοΈ
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Some day
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Yeah somewhere someday ππ
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating my work
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Poetry with a dash of hope. Loved this piece.
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Thank you mate for ur doping words πππ«
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A place that does not ask us
to be anything more
than we already are,
… especially loved these lines…where is this place?do let me know too…
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The place is in my veins π
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deep…
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My pleasureππππ
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I love the way you kept the language simple, sutle and it make beautiful impact. ππ
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Thank you dear π for ur sweet words π means a lot to me π
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Adorable wish..its awesomeπ€ππ»ππ»
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Thanxxxxxxxx mate π π
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β€ π€© This is such heart warming poem. I loved this.
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Thank you pen for your words βοΈππ
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Thank you Niru for writing like this.
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Yeaaa ,many more to come ππ
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You too look out for my series
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Yeah I’m dear ππ ,forgive me if I skip any of dem ,or just remind me wid link π
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For sure, I do not know if you read https://wordpress.com/read/blogs/145173519/posts/968
Thanks buddy
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I read reee , y do u think dat π
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Very lovely and cute poemπππ
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Thank you sushma ππ
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Wonderful….beaituful essence!!!
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Thanxx a lot Fariha ππ glad dat u loved my piece π
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This is so beautiful. It’s written in such simple words, yet the message shines out brighter than everything else! I like the end very much. πΌ
-Firefly
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Yeah Firefly πππ, I want to try dis out like u said simple words but deep meaning & I think I’ve made it clear wod mi writing.
& Yes thank you very much for your kind words ππ
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Yess! You have done justice to your experiment then. It’s very difficult to express depth in easy looking words. π Keep going, Nirant!
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Thank you again Firefly π
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My god ….loads of love . I’m floating on clouds π€ππππ
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I’m fading π΅π΅π΅
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I’m faded
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Lol we have same taste πππ
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Out beyond ideas of right doing and wrong doing there’s a field. I’ll meet you there….. – Rumi
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Vet well said by Rumi πππ
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Yeah it’s one of my favorite.
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Good collection of saying
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I’m weaved into him
Thread by thread
Strand by strand
Entwined by love
Incessant love and
Obscure actions
Weaved together
By unfathomable Love.
…… —– Adithya π
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Dis one is my fav ππππππ
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Pleasure to meet you & have u in my zone πβοΈππ€
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π wonderful nirant! β₯
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Thank you ekta jiii π glad dat u loved my piece π
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π pleasure bud!
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Really awesome……well penned Nirantπππ
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Thank you tamizhan ππ
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Welcome Nirantπ
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Awesome π I love the way u wrote it
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Thank you deep . Glad dat u loved it ππ
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