Maybe one day
you & I will be together,
in a place
where the sun tickles
our faces,
Where the rain invites us to dance.
A place that does not ask us
to be anything more
than we already are,
A place where the words
we have searched for_
yearned to say,
are simple.
_Niranโ .
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I like your love poems
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Thank youuuuuuuu !!
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Nope thank you
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Nice and to the point
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Yeah mate ๐
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Simple yet to the point
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Yess dear straight on point !!
Thank you so much Nisha ๐ค
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Direct kool
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Koool โบ๏ธ
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Some day
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Yeah somewhere someday ๐๐
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating my work
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Poetry with a dash of hope. Loved this piece.
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Thank you mate for ur doping words ๐๐๐ซ
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A place that does not ask us
to be anything more
than we already are,
… especially loved these lines…where is this place?do let me know too…
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The place is in my veins ๐
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deep…
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My pleasure๐๐๐๐
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I love the way you kept the language simple, sutle and it make beautiful impact. ๐๐
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Thank you dear ๐ for ur sweet words ๐ means a lot to me ๐
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Adorable wish..its awesome๐ค๐๐ป๐๐ป
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Thanxxxxxxxx mate ๐ ๐
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โค ๐คฉ This is such heart warming poem. I loved this.
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Thank you pen for your words โ๏ธ๐๐
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Thank you Niru for writing like this.
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Yeaaa ,many more to come ๐๐
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You too look out for my series
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Yeah I’m dear ๐๐ ,forgive me if I skip any of dem ,or just remind me wid link ๐
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For sure, I do not know if you read https://wordpress.com/read/blogs/145173519/posts/968
Thanks buddy
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I read reee , y do u think dat ๐
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Very lovely and cute poem๐๐๐
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Thank you sushma ๐๐
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Wonderful….beaituful essence!!!
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Thanxx a lot Fariha ๐๐ glad dat u loved my piece ๐
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This is so beautiful. It’s written in such simple words, yet the message shines out brighter than everything else! I like the end very much. ๐ผ
-Firefly
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Yeah Firefly ๐๐๐, I want to try dis out like u said simple words but deep meaning & I think I’ve made it clear wod mi writing.
& Yes thank you very much for your kind words ๐๐
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Yess! You have done justice to your experiment then. It’s very difficult to express depth in easy looking words. ๐ Keep going, Nirant!
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Thank you again Firefly ๐
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My god ….loads of love . I’m floating on clouds ๐ค๐๐๐๐
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๐๐๐๐โค
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I’m fading ๐ต๐ต๐ต
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I’m faded
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Lol we have same taste ๐๐๐
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Out beyond ideas of right doing and wrong doing there’s a field. I’ll meet you there….. – Rumi
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Vet well said by Rumi ๐๐๐
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Yeah it’s one of my favorite.
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Good collection of saying
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I’m weaved into him
Thread by thread
Strand by strand
Entwined by love
Incessant love and
Obscure actions
Weaved together
By unfathomable Love.
…… —– Adithya ๐
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Dis one is my fav ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Pleasure to meet you & have u in my zone ๐โ๏ธ๐๐ค
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๐ wonderful nirant! โฅ
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Thank you ekta jiii ๐ glad dat u loved my piece ๐
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๐ pleasure bud!
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Really awesome……well penned Nirant๐๐๐
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Thank you tamizhan ๐๐
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Welcome Nirant๐
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Awesome ๐ I love the way u wrote it
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Thank you deep . Glad dat u loved it ๐๐
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