I want to let people in
without fear of them
taking everything they find,
Good & leaving.
I want to lounge around
In my thoughts, my feelings
to laugh with me
when I need it,
to put an arm around me,
when when I don’t
As they go, I want to hear
see you later
flow from their lips
Instead of goodbye.
_Niranβ .
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Loved this one… feels a lotβ€
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Thank youuuuuuuu for stopping by and appreciating mi work Breeta .
I loved your name too βΊοΈ
Breeta unique name !! What’s the meaning of Breeta?
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Actually the word in Bengali was ‘Brito’, someone who’s welcome or respected or ordained, something like that. Ma added an extra ‘a’ and made it ‘Breeta’. But I should have never looked up my name-meaning in Google…it went hilarious π
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ππππ hilarious innovative gal .
Khoob bhaloo π
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Beautiful β€οΈ
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Thank you for your sweet word mate βοΈπ―π
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This is relatable. π Very painful, indeed. I hope you never have to hear a goodbye again.
So, it’s a *See you later* from my side, haha. π
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Dats wat I want to hear from u βοΈπ€· Fireflyπ
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Yayyy! πΊ
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so sweet…
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Aww ,thank you so much Geetππ
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most welcome…
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Well it’s a month dat we know each other Geet ,well u look married woman ,so if u have time ,& if interested u can join my WhatsApp group . I’m just saying not forcing π
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Well looks can be deceptive…I’m single…not married..
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Oooppssss π but my invitation is on wai8!!!!
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Beautiful post
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Thank you dawg ππ
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I never say good bye to closed ones….and to u tooππ
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That’s wat I want to hear from u all fellas ππ, hope u loved mi small piece βΊοΈ
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Hey Nirant! π
I have nominated you for:
https://dexterouswriterblog.wordpress.com/2018/07/20/nominated-for-the-bloggers-recognition-award
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Sure I’ll look into it as soon as possible βοΈππ
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βAs they go, I want to hear
see you later
flow from their lips
Instead of goodbye.β
This is amazing! πΉβ₯οΈ
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Thank you Shreya π glad dat u loved my small piece thank you ππ
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Anybody would love to hear see you later instead of goodbye because there is hope,affection in see you later whereas goodbye kills all hopes..lovely poemπβΊοΈ
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Actually βΊοΈ, so never say goodbye π
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See you later π
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Yupieeeeeee π
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I never liked Goodbyes, and you expressed it so beautifully.. ππ
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Thank you thank you Himanshi πππ
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No one can say gud bye to you…brilliant poemππ»ππ»
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Thank you mate ππππ
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You always welcome dearπ€
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Well I’ll never say goodbye again. Lovely poem π
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πΆπ΅Thank you *Thought for Change* π
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You’re welcome Nirant Gurav π€
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Full name πππ
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I even know your middle name.
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Wat ???? Wer did u got ??? R u a spy??????π¦
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Lol
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Okay msg me personally
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NRG πΉ
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Stalker πarii
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Lol
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