I want to let people in
without fear of them
taking everything they find,
Good & leaving.
I want to lounge around
In my thoughts, my feelings
to laugh with me
when I need it,
to put an arm around me,
when when I don’t
As they go, I want to hear
see you later
flow from their lips
Instead of goodbye.
_Niranโ .
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Loved this one… feels a lotโค
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Thank youuuuuuuu for stopping by and appreciating mi work Breeta .
I loved your name too โบ๏ธ
Breeta unique name !! What’s the meaning of Breeta?
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Actually the word in Bengali was ‘Brito’, someone who’s welcome or respected or ordained, something like that. Ma added an extra ‘a’ and made it ‘Breeta’. But I should have never looked up my name-meaning in Google…it went hilarious ๐
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๐๐๐๐ hilarious innovative gal .
Khoob bhaloo ๐
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Beautiful โค๏ธ
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Thank you for your sweet word mate โ๏ธ๐ฏ๐
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This is relatable. ๐ Very painful, indeed. I hope you never have to hear a goodbye again.
So, it’s a *See you later* from my side, haha. ๐
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Dats wat I want to hear from u โ๏ธ๐คท Firefly๐
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Yayyy! ๐บ
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so sweet…
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Aww ,thank you so much Geet๐๐
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most welcome…
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Well it’s a month dat we know each other Geet ,well u look married woman ,so if u have time ,& if interested u can join my WhatsApp group . I’m just saying not forcing ๐
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Well looks can be deceptive…I’m single…not married..
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Oooppssss ๐ but my invitation is on wai8!!!!
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Beautiful post
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Thank you dawg ๐๐
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I never say good bye to closed ones….and to u too๐๐
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That’s wat I want to hear from u all fellas ๐๐, hope u loved mi small piece โบ๏ธ
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Hey Nirant! ๐
I have nominated you for:
https://dexterouswriterblog.wordpress.com/2018/07/20/nominated-for-the-bloggers-recognition-award
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Sure I’ll look into it as soon as possible โ๏ธ๐๐
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โAs they go, I want to hear
see you later
flow from their lips
Instead of goodbye.โ
This is amazing! ๐นโฅ๏ธ
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Thank you Shreya ๐ glad dat u loved my small piece thank you ๐๐
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Anybody would love to hear see you later instead of goodbye because there is hope,affection in see you later whereas goodbye kills all hopes..lovely poem๐โบ๏ธ
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Actually โบ๏ธ, so never say goodbye ๐
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See you later ๐
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Yupieeeeeee ๐
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I never liked Goodbyes, and you expressed it so beautifully.. ๐๐
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Thank you thank you Himanshi ๐๐๐
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No one can say gud bye to you…brilliant poem๐๐ป๐๐ป
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Thank you mate ๐๐๐๐
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You always welcome dear๐ค
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Well I’ll never say goodbye again. Lovely poem ๐
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๐ถ๐ตThank you *Thought for Change* ๐
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You’re welcome Nirant Gurav ๐ค
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Full name ๐๐๐
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I even know your middle name.
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Wat ???? Wer did u got ??? R u a spy??????๐ฆ
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Lol
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Okay msg me personally
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NRG ๐น
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Stalker ๐arii
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Lol
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