beauty, Love Poem

Her Heart

She is to believe that love

Should feel like a storm

Passionate,

Raw and raging.

But so many storms

Left her

More broken than before.

Now she looks for a love

That feels

Like a night

After the storm

Is over.

The ebbing waves of emotion

Engulfed half her mind

In a state of dilemma

Induced by love

She lost her heart.

Like a tree after a storm

She wished for zephyr

But what followed was pure rage

And left her shattered

Like crystals of ice.

But she lost her heart

And now she doesn’t

Want it back

For she doesn’t want to

Fall prey to love again

And with a heart

She just might!.

_Adithya & Niran†.


This tragic love poem is the collaboration between me & Adithya http://Thought for change . I was impressed the way she concluded the poem .


Hope you all enjoyed our collaboration.


πŸŽ€Happy Blogging πŸŽ€

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57 thoughts on “Her Heart”

  1. The ending as you told is fab. This collab is so beautifully heart wrenching with a hope of falling in love again at the end. Hope against hope is life all about.
    As I told you earlier you both are good at this and you both seem to be at ease with each other when you write a collab. Which is such a necessity when you attend a collab.

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    1. Your words means a lot dear ☺️
      Yess ending it’s lit as wen we both do the collaboration , I always start & She conclude it πŸ’• ..
      Thank you so much for your kind words and support ☺️
      Means a lot to us

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      1. Yessss mate !!
        A good start to any piece is must, but to Carry that flow & conclude it has to be more important & readers should not get bored while reading it . And she knows how to play with words πŸ˜‰ ✌️
        Have a good day ahead

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  2. OH MY GOSH…………THIS IS HOW I FEEL EVERY DAY while i try to look for that someone to come and safe me from this war i am still fighting i can relate to this so much

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  3. Amazing! With two poetic minds and beautiful souls coming into a collaboration, the outcome has to be this special. Awesome piece created guys! Too good.. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

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  4. The beauty of this poem is inexplicable! It’s your first collaboration and I am in awe of this. You both have created something ethereal, something out of this world! ❀ I love how this poem makes me feel, the heartbreak and the intensity is overwhelming. Also, the end is powerful. This is one masterpiece, and my new favourite on your blog. 🌼 Keep going you both.
    -Firefly 🐝

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