What a world we live in
with an irony sky
& rotten ground,
Poisoned waters
& dreadful sounds.
Air so heavily covered
with a though thick smoke
it’s like mother hearts,
having a stroke.
Killing ourselves
slowly but surely
feeding discase instead
of finding the cure.
_Niran†.
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These words are a feast for the eyes as well as the soul Nirant😊😊Makes us question what’s wrong with people these days.
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Yessss !! Everytime, everywhere the question arise 🙇
Thank you for showing love to my writing ☺️
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So true.
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Yeah it’s damn true !!
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Bitter face of the world.. nicely written 😊
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Thank youuuuuuuu for stopping by and appreciating mi work mate
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Always welcome 😊
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Omg, wow mother’s heart getting a Stoke you took my heart
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Now dis made my early morning pretty awesome . U r such a beautiful soul dear . The kind of comments u gave are very much valuable & means a lot to me for my future writings .
I think rebirthshande is not your real name !!
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If u wrote that poem in second it was brilliant
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No not in second but tooks some mins to get appropriate words
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Truly! Poetry comes right from the soul!❤️ That was very poignant!
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Yeaaa mate , evoking a keen sense of sadness
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https://wp.me/p9Zjq1-1h
Liebster award
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Nirant your poem just made me wonder that this world ain’t getting better as claimed by the revolutionists. We are just making it worse in the quest of a better world. Beautifully written poem.
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Yesss!!!! Dear ,we r just killing ourselves bi our hands & thank you so much for your kind words 😉 ✌️ means a lot to me
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My pleasure and keep on sharing such thought provoking writings. 😊🌸
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Sure Rameen 💫
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Yesss!!!! Dear ,we r just killing ourselves bi our hands & thank you so much for your kind words 😉 ✌️ means a lot to me
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Really a thought provoking poem..we definitely need to do something about it👍🏻
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Yeah my frnd!!!! We have to 💫
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As always a lovely blog with deeper and strong words👍😊
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Thank you thank you so much for your kind words 😉✌️, means a lot to me 💫🙌
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Well written…
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Thank you Geet for ur words 🙌💫
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Welcome…
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You always surprise me with your words Nirant! Very well versed! 👍
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Thank you himanshi!! for ur sweet words 🙌💫, .means a lot
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Mention it not buddy. 😊
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This is really something to think about. Greaaat writing 😊
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Thank you for your kind words 😉✌️
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You have expressed the conditions of our contemporary life through a astonishingly beautiful poem through powerful words.
Here lies the power of an efficient writer ## Proud of you brother 💐
Keep sharing
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Powerful message …
Thought provoking
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Yeah!!! Mate 💯…..
Thank you for your words ✌️
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😍
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😊
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Yeah..I loved ur post as always 💞😊
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Thank you for your sweet words 🐝✌️
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This is really like tribute to a bitter truth👍👍
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Yeah mate 😊, hope u loved mi short writing
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That’s very poignant
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Yeah!!!! evoking a keen sense of sadness
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😉
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😉
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