I gave , I gave ,
I gave until nothing
Of me is left
maybe that’s how I love,
giving and
giving
without talking,
giving,
Until my hands are bloodied
from wrenching my heart open,
Until my heart’s bruised & scarred
for wearing it on my sleeve
to often and
tooo long.
I gave and gave
until I’m no more, until I’m m
But a canvas full of empty spaces
& Bullet holes.
_Niranβ .
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Love is really mysterious.
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Yess dear it is !! π
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When i really love someone i give up anything to keep them happy and Also when i really love someone i would rather have my heart bleed out so that person can have a longer life then i did growing up from being bullied and being called names getting told to go home and kill someone i love so much i want the person who i love live a better life then i did but I will always be by their side through bad and good sick and health poor and rich I will do anything to keep that person happy even when we have a fight i will hug him and say everythings gonna be okay
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That’s so sweet .
Amazingly beautiful gesture & lovable gal ur
Love from
_Ney bae
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Thank you for saying i’m beautiful Love from _Ney Bae
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U are a giver of love u shall get ur soulmate soon amen
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Hope so …. My writings work out in process of getting my soulmate .
But do u believe in soulmates?????
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Thatβs a tricky one yes and no
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Kool π
I think everyone has their personal views on it !! Right ??
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Yeah mind filters what it wants too but great insight
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Nicely done
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Thank you for ur word:)
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My pleasure
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A canvas full of empty spaces and bullet holes…loved it. Wonderful writing.
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Thank you Rameen π« for ur sweet words π βοΈ means a lot
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It’s my pleasure Nirant π
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Glad to have you in mi zone π
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I feel the same ππΈπΈ
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Painful yeh beautifulππΌ
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Yet*
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Yeah very painful π
& Thank you so much for your kind words means a lot to me βοΈπ
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This is just sad. When we give everything, when we are left empty and alone, who’s gonna be there for us?
Hey, don’t hesitate to visit my blog page, I would really like to connect with you. π
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Actually dear ,it’s really sad .
& Thank you for your words , surely I’ll visit ur page for some interesting stuff πβοΈ
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You’re welcome. I love this piece, very much so. I like sad and broken things.
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Okay okay so stay tuned for more stuff on my zone βοΈπ
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Beautiful.. Something true expressed in its tiniest details. Lovely
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Ohhhhhh ,after long time dear . Nice 2 see u back .
& Thank you so much for your sweet words π βοΈ means a lot to me
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Painfully beautiful dude π
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Thank you so much dawg ππ
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Thatβs really painful nirantπ
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Yeaaaa ,but sometimes many survive . #positivevibes
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Yupp..positive vibesπ
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I gave and gave
Until I’m no more, until I’m m
But a canvas full of empty spaces
& Bullet holes…
Oh god!……. Prickling in heart…
Amazing ππππ
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Thank you sushma . Glad dat u loved mi piece ππ
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A heartfelt poetry Nirant! Intensely expressed!
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Thank you dear for ur sweet words ππ
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Wow this is amazing
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Thank you Adiii for ur words . Learning from u as always ππ
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