Love Poem, Poems

You and I

You

&

I,

We felt too much,

we felt more,

more that what we

could grasp,more

than what we could

utter with eyes

that can never fully

see,

more than what our

mouths could ever speak of.

You & I,

we felt too much

& feel too deep

but in the end,

it still wasn’t enough.

_Niran†.

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47 thoughts on “You and I”

  1. Aww! Such a sweet sweet poem. It was really beautiful.
    “You & I,
    we felt too much & feel too deep but in the end,it still wasn’t enough”.
    – my favourite part of the poem.
    It’s never enoughhhhhhhhhhh…….

    It had a good flow, and the vocab usage was really good. The emotion is portrayed brilliantly. An excellent job!
    Keep it up!

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