It’s hardly my fault
That my body’s
Got you mesmerized.
Don’t blame me,
That your hands have
Found a home
Around my waist
But I’m responsible,
For that kiss I planted
On your mouth
I’ll take credit for that.
_Niranโ .
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Very good.
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Thank youuuuuuuu !!
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It’s really lovely.
I remembered a poem ravindranath tagore the emotions are similar but expression is different.
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It is really beautiful. I am not able to stop me giving complements but really I don’t have any word.
AFREEN
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Great great !!
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I am speechless…๐
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Hehehehe Nargis ,don’t go speechless !!
I need ur beautiful words and support for my writing โบ๏ธ
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This is beautifully written. ๐
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Thank you so much for your beautiful words โบ๏ธ
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That is good work.
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Thank you Sunil for stopping by and appreciating mi work
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Beautiful โฅ๏ธ
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Thank you for ur sweet word ๐
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My pleasure ๐
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Such a lovely poem it is Nirant๐๐
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Thank you so much Ridhima for your kind words means a lot ๐๐ .
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Ooooh! Beautiful Nirant ๐ How do you write such masterpiece? โก
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Thank you…!!!! Sabh aapse seekhe hai ๐โ๏ธ
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โกโก
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Expression of boundless love!!
Very beautiful!!
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Thank you so much Supriya for your sweet words, means a lot to me โ๏ธโ๏ธ
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Welcome welcome!!
Keep going…
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Brought smiles to me. Lovely
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Thank you so much Gentlemen ๐ for your kind words , means a lot to me . Glad that u loved mi small piece:)
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My pleasure always
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Ohhhhh my god๐ฏits not your fault at all ๐
Dat she is crazy abt you๐๐๐
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Haha…!! Mate thank you for your sweet sweet line.๐ Yeah it’s not my fault coz she is in love WID mi words & soul toooooo๐ซ
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Yea..she is lucky to have you๐๐
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Yeaaaaaaaa…..!!!!!!!!! My frnddddd
Chai piloo frnd๐
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Yukkkk๐คข
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๐๐๐๐๐๐๐it’s ur dish dear & yuuk dialogue is mine ๐
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How dare you say that Nirant gurav๐๐ป๐๐ป
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Dare!!!!! No need Miss zeeviews
Niriinder never get scare to say anything
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Ohhhhh…challenge haa ๐คจ
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Ha Bhai haaaaaร …!!!!!๐
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Toh jo mai bolungi krna padega๐
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Joo hukum mere aakaaaa๐
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Oooh! So clever, haha. Such an amazing play of words. Loved reading this, Nirant. ๐ผ
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Ohh..!!! Wow look who is back after decades ,mi frnd Firefly ๐.
We’re was u dear …… suddenly disappeared.
& Thank you so much for your kind words ๐ โ๏ธ means a lot to me
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Hahaa, has it been decades already? I am on disappear mode na, I’ll be back kya pata kab. ๐น And, it’s always a pleasure to read your work. Keep writing. ๐ผ
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Shukriya ๐
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Nice !!
Penned well ๐
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Thank you so much dear for ur kind words ๐โ๏ธ
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*containing
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Poem contains lovely excuse..๐๐
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Thank you sush for ur sweet words ๐๐๐
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It’s gud…!!!
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Thank you mate for ur word ๐โ๏ธ
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