Maybe when the clouds
Crossed over the sky
It was because,
The universe didn’t want to looked at.
Didn’t want to be explored
And analyzed and naively
Deciphered…..
Maybe there are times
When the universe just
Wants to be alone.
Maybe just this one,
The universe & I had
Something in common.
Her head scarf were her clouds
Covering her face she walked
Hiding from starting eyes
For it’s solitude she preferred.
But a violent wind
Shocked her world
& Unveiled she was.
I’ve never seen eyes
That was this serene
& I wondered what
Made her hide
Just then our eyes crossed
And she read my
Diaphanous heart,
And we both live in
Solitude now
With each other
Under the Veiled Sky
And the universe
arranged for that.
_Niran† & Adi†hya.
In collaboration with http://Though for change
©The Rendezvous Club &
©The Poem zone
Hope you all enjoyed our writing .
Happy Blogging 🎀
Lovely.
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Thank you dear ❤️
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Nice. ☺
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Thank you so much dear for your kind words
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Reblogged this to The Art of Life
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Yeah I saw it !!
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Awesome, It was truly worthy of it.
Great poem!
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Yeah it was a collaboration
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Oh, cool. So u aren’t the only brilliant mind behind it. 😉
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Yeah just two or three on my blog which I’ve done a collaboration
Yess u can say that , it’s a team work with that pretty soul !!
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Thank you so much for ur sweet gesture !!
And it’s Nirant ❤️
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Reblogged this on The Art of Life and commented:
Under The Vaild Sky, by Nirvana Gurav. Was a poem that reminds us what underneath.
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Thank you so much mate for ur kidness 🤝❤️
It’s Nirant not Nirvana !!
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Your very welcome!
Oops, sorry for the typo, NIRANT. 🙊lol!
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Hehe it’s okay 😊
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👍🏻
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🤝🤝
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Real beautiful poem. How to write a collaborative poem given you have a collaborator. You do one half the other the rest?
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It’s just me and my frnd do it wen we want too !!
I’ve total 4 collbas with her !!
I always start and she ends it beautifully
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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Absolutely beautiful writing from two solitude loving hearts 😊👏👏👏
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Thank you so much dear for stopping by and appreciating our work !!
Do check my new poems too !!
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Sure 😊👍
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Reblogged this on .
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Thank you so much for your sweet gesture ☺️
Glad u liked it
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Wow, wow, wow, 😊😍😍😍😍Mind blowing…😉😉😉
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Thank you… thank you.. thank you… thank you…. So much dear for yr mind blowing words ☺️☺️
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Welcome…😊😉
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Both you and Adhi are good at the collabs. Carry on the tradition. Good work this is, I must say. All the best for both of your future writings.
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Thank you so much Anamika .
Glad to hear that ☺️☺️💕
Have a great day ahead ✌️
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You too Nirant. And the response was a pleasure.
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☺️
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Nature knows best
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Exactly !! ☺️
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Loved it Nirant. Beautifully written poem ❤
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Thank you Rameen 💫 for ur sweet words ,means a lot to me for mi future writings 😊🎀
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You’re most welcome Nirant 😊🌸🌸
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😊
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Penned well
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Thank you so much for your kind words 😉✌️
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Amazingly penned!
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Thank you mate for ur kind words 😉 ✌️
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But a violent wind Shocked her whole world…Nirant & Adithya..well done guys🙌🏻👍🏻
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Yeah , wind shocked her whole world..!!😔, But after that there is hope of rays , rays of sunshine which can change the whole scenario .😔
& Yeah Thank you dear for your kind words ,means a lot to me for mi future writings
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Its a cloudy day with no sunshine left…
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Clouds comes rarely , but if you go out and enjoy the sunshines, you will get to know that they are beautiful ,just to trust them ones ,
And again & in whole life ,they will never disappoint you . I guarantee
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Thank you so much my friend for assurance..bt unfortunately there’s no guarantee of anything in this world except materialistic things
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Remember they moment of happiness that cloud showers every time , so due to some mistake , I think u should not loose Hope , Sunshine’s make u feel more happy & more realistic than before .
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Well written 👏👏
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Thank you Supriya , Thank you for ur kind words , means a lot to me for mi future writings 😊
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Your welcome..
N u deserve these appreciating words.
All the best for future writings.
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😊😊
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Loved it!
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Thank you for your kind word Riman ✌️😉🎀
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👌👌👏👏💞
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🐝 Thank you sush
Glad that u loved it & responded to it 😊
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Pleasure always for beautiful collaboration like this 🤗🤗🍫
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😊🎀
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