I wanted you to know
How happy I was with you
I swear, I tried
Reminding myself
Of that too
But no matter how hard I try
To make myself realise
These wounds
You inflicted me
Reminded me
Of the jet stream of pain
Sorrow & Misery
Giving me flashbacks
Of the day
You left me.
_Niranβ .
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Straight from the heart. π I could feel your pain huh. I am observing, you used to write more of heartbreak and stuff like that previously! So emotional. β₯
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Haha , I told u from October π€«π it all started !!
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Yeppp dear !!
But things are back on track as living my life sobber with my old friend ie worrds
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Unbelievable, is it true story!π²
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Yess dear !!
A long distance relationship π
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Heartbreak…π
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Yess !! It’s break my heart into small pieces when she walked off !!
But now that pieces have gone rough & tough & I’ve joined them !!
And never ever give it to anyone to even peep into it also π
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I didn’t walk off from want we have…I’m still standing by your side always I hope we can still date? Luve ya
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Yes we are dear
I’ll just catch u today okay Ney π
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Hayyyyyy<3
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Hieeeeeeee ney !!
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HAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!! Bae
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Hiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeee Ney
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Hay How are you
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Im good
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thats good
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You should go follow Ace Champ
He is my guy best friend
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Sure some other day !!
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Okay lol hru
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Good
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thats good
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Sometimes it hurts a lot to see people leave but at the end healing after a breakup is a beautiful process. πΌπΈ
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Yeah it’s a beautiful process & we get to learn a lot from that healing π
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I agree. πΈ
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It is important to distinguish between pain and passion. Sometimes in our desperate search for love we confuse the two, and fall victim to abuse.
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Exactly !!
U got ur words right dear !!
We always create confusion in this two ,& end up nowhere
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I am a romantic person and this poem is so in touch, but I want to add” I was always happy to leave you at the same time.”
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Wowwwwwwww mate , brilliant add βΊοΈ .
And thank you for stopping by and appreciating mi work
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Beautifully penned
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Thank youuuuuuuu mate for ur sweet words
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This feels
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Yeah !! It deeply feels π
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A sad story farewell is very sad
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Yeah very sad wen we realize it π
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Probably letting go, as hard as that may be, is the best thing to do. Been there and I know the discomfort of it.
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Yessssss !!! Mate ur absolutely right wid ur words .
Thank youuuuuuuu for stopping by and reviewing my lil work ,means a lot to me for future writings
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The pleasure is all mine. And I am glad to have chanced upon your writing! π
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awesome lines!
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Thank you mate for ur kind words π βοΈ
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hey mate, you write good, i was just wondering if you were interested to guest post on each other’s blog
let me know π
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Like what I’ve to do????
Guest post !!!!
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Heart touching lines….
Take care mate
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Sure mate for ur words ,ur just a lovely soul π
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Those unrequited love moments. Lovely write up
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Thank you fir stopping by and appreciating mi work:-)
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My pleasure
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This post acted as a reminder of the same feelings. It’s a circle of life they say! π
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Yeah mate ,life is a circle & very small in size π
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Touching lines
I can feel it
Great job
Keep sharing
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Thank youuuuuuuu mate for ur words π
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I feel that some times some different things get to me. I have a tough out side with a leather tough inside soul at times. Better to let music destroy all my objections to what I come across at times.
I pick The Kentucky Headhunters Awesome group country rock I think
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Yeah Gentleman ,same pinch , let the music destroy all the stuff .
Thank you Sir for your kind words
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You are welcome for my kind words. I love music truly. Yes song writers have a lyrical license to create songs !!
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Yeah yeah they have a lyrical license & they are just raw with their words
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Yes some are just raw others are fantastic
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Yessssss !!!!! Man , ur so good with your words
Glad to have u in my zone π
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You are welcome. I am glad to have you in my zone also. Take care and have fun time creating anything for our eyes !!
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Sure sir ,good time connecting with you:-)
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Yes I do agree it has been a good time tonight here connecting with you also Stay positive
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Sometimes it’s better that u don’t explain urself in some situations …
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Yeah mate ur absolutely right π
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U should be thankful ..to her becoz she did not listen to ur emotions …at least she did not insult your emotions..
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Yeah mate I’m very much thankful to her to come in my life .
& Talking about insult , so she is a beautiful soul I ever had in mah life till date π.
And thank youuuuuuuu for stopping by and appreciating mi work Sanika π
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Painful π’
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Yeah mate ,words straight away came out from my heart π
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I can totally feel you , brother
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Heartfelt lines π
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Heartfelt …….yeah mate u got ur word right π
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