Love Poem, Pain

Modern love story

There was a teenaged girl

Who believed that the topic of love

Was just a myth,

Like unicorns & trolls

Never did she ever come close

To falling as hard as she did.

Without warning,

Without direction.

And God did she know

That the whole in which she was

Falling in,

Would have an impetuous doom

Like the cold hard ground

As if her fragile body would be

Able to endure the impact

And she knew its doom.



He just loved playing games

He wanted the feeling of being wanted

He needed to reassure his ego

Playing the game so diligently

To control the game & to ensure

That he will win…..

And he did win.

And she knew her doom

And he did leave

And she’s broken beyond repair.

_Niranโ€ .



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    1. Yess dear !! The bitter truth of this modern day love story .
      So the thing is …don’t fall in love ,but feel the love โ˜บ๏ธ
      Thank you so much for your kind words means a lot to me for my future writings ๐ŸŽ€


    1. Yess ma’am it’s heartbreaking and u can call it as a bitter truth if this modern day love ๐Ÿ™‡.
      So just wanna say ….don’t fall in love but feel the love โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ
      Thank you so much Savitha ma’am for ur constant support & appreciation to my writings โ˜บ๏ธ
      Means a lot to me for my future writings ๐ŸŽ€

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  2. This reminds me of how i feel Deep down….Sometimes I just know if i go near the sound of calling my name i know it’s doom because It’s just a trap but i hear another voice saying my name and He is far away from where i am but i hear him calling my name saying these nice things And I feel her pain

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    1. Yess dear there is a doom Everytime in relationship after all it’s a modern day love ๐Ÿ˜‰.
      But I gurantee the one who is far & saying all this words to you is feeling lucky to have u in his life .
      Much love from _Ney bae ๐Ÿ’•

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      1. I will also i am going back into town today because we need to get more things from into town so i will be safe and I will take care and you too be safe and have a good day and night

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    1. Well I can say u that feel in love with words and thoughts ,but don’t fall in love for wrong one !! He /she will never feel u more special than words โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ
      And after all this piece is a bitter truth of modern love story we all see !!


    1. Thank you so much Mate for stopping by and appreciating mi work !!
      Yess u can say it a story ,real life story and bitter truth of modern day love ๐Ÿ™‡.
      Hope to see your support in future too โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ


    1. True that !!
      We are no one here to play with others feelings !!
      If u love them , then love them till last and don’t step back and leave the person alone ๐Ÿ™ƒ
      Thank you so much for your kind words and constant support for my writings dear . Can I get ur good name ?


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