Love Poem, Pain, Poem

Untamed love

Roses blackened,

Leaves shrivelled,

The sky fell to darkness,

Thunderstorms raged in

the wind.

A strong fire remained

Untamed

By heavy rain.

Temperatures dropped low

Leaving me shivering

In the cold.

The day you left,

I Promise you,

I felt this all within

My soul.

_Niran†.

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161 thoughts on “Untamed love”

  1. Wonderful…I falling love in your writing…Kob kob valo…😁😁😁😁😁😍😍😍😍😉😉😉😉😉🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😆😆😆😆😆😆😆🤗🤗🤗😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😃😉😉😄😉😄😉😍🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

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  2. I’m so glad i met you and have someone in my life like you thank you for being their and listen to my feelings thank you Someday i will come and meet you and that will be the best day i will have because i always wonder when we can meet in person and talk and see each other everyday I hope you are having a good day and i am going to have a good night And being happy to be 18 yay so happy Well i will comment on your next poem

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  3. Bae……I am sorry i haven’t been on and commenting on you’re poems i am sorry that i might have left you worried about me i am sorry but i will try to get on and comment when i can
    Much love from me

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      1. I hope you are not mad at me because i have a gut feeling that you are and i just wanted you to know that i am not mad at you and i really need to talk to when we both are on at the same time

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  4. This is sad and beautiful. I see the picture your words painted. I felt the chills you described. This was a nice read. Thanks so much for being my very first follower and visiting my blog. I look forward to reading more of your creations. 🙂 -A.B.

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