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Star Girl

I know a girl,

Who has magic under her skin.

She has oceans in her smile

And held the Universe within.

She has constellations in her eyes

And sunshine in her soul,

Stardust swam through her veins,

And danced around her skull.

The star Girl is so desired,

The rain fell for her over & over.

She is more than just a child of the moon,

She is a walking supernova.

_Niran†.

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257 thoughts on “Star Girl”

  1. Hey Nirant,, truly marvellous … I have seen poems but your style of writing is completely heart touching and i m sure , whosoever reads ur lines, their special ones definitely come to their minds. 🙂 ….

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      1. When you’re on life crossroad…it takes time and moving ahead only option and you feel numb. Just busy picking some pieces 😊 Thanks for asking bud mean a lot.

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      1. So sorry I haven’t been around more! I definitely don’t get all the notifications for your posts. . .did you hear that wordpress???!
        Lol. I’ll be reading more x

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  2. Beautifully crafted, Nirant, so delicate and full of lyricism. All the images related to our universe are wonderful to describe this girl. I also like the rhymes “skin” and “within” of the second and fourth verses. The whole poem has a lovely flow.

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  3. A very l9vely description..but nirant how could you compare the beauty and supernovae..it acrually made me think as supernovae occur when a star dies..if so, what you want to convey by this compariso..

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  4. That’s so nice…this girl is very special….🤪🤪🤪🤪😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😆😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉😉😉😉🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂

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    1. Hehehe Thank youuuuuuuu so much dear for ur sweet words 😊
      And thank you especially for this new word called dovey 😂
      And u can go with nirant , gentleman gives me wings and I don’t want to fly at the moment 😉

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      1. Haha haha…I totally agree with this..It’s my most hated subject..You the worst part..We keep on focusing on the problems we faced rather than the solutions…It’s the most negative book I’ve ever known..all war n death n destruction..

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      2. When I’ll be done with Boards…We definitely will so that the next generations don’t suffer…!
        No Compulsion Of History In School….!😂

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