Love Poem, Poem

Deeper

Let’s jump into the ocean

Together

And dive down into

Something deeper,

Something deeper than our

Lungs can bear.

And if we never see the surface

Again,

At least we can say

We felt something

So deep

That it took our breath

Away.

_Niranโ€ .

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177 thoughts on “Deeper”

  1. Beautifully written, evoking all the senses (diving into the ocean, deep breath…). I like the symbol of the ocean as water stands for emotions and feelings according to psychology. Your lovely poem just made me think of love and passion between people whose ages are different. What about wanting all this your poem so wonderfully expresses but getting attracted to someone who is much younger or older than ourselves? How does age affect love and passion and how does poverty because of the Capitalist system affect them too? I recommend you these two lovely posts by my friend Mario Savioni. I think they connect very well with your poem here where there is always a gap between our dreams and desires, and our hard realities.

    Love and passion with age difference: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/01/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-4/

    Love and passion affected by poverty and the Capitalist system when your basic needs like food and roof are still not met: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/02/three-meals-a-day-and-housing/

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      1. You are very kindly welcome, Nirant. You will see the two links I have sent are two short texts (it just takes a few minutes to read both). You will see the connection with your lovely piece. Mario and you are great writers (I am so jealous of you both). It is just that he deserves more likes and/or comments than my humble writing.

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  2. Romantic…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

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      1. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Yeah, very deep…๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šha๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿค“๐Ÿค  ๐Ÿค ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿคช ๐Ÿคชhahahahahaha

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  3. I love this so much and i just love reading you’re poems their so amazing and I told you i would read and comment a long comment on here about how amazing you and you’re poems are they are like beyond the galaxy that is so beautiful i love this Bae and i would swim the whole ocean for someone ๐Ÿ™‚ I love reading your poems and talking to you….You’re so sweet and nice wonderful person ever

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