The Fresh leaves of a
Balmy spring morning
Asked me to write a song,
On the chemistry
We once shared and
How it all ended,
Right where it started.
…
When all I ever wanted
Was to imagine my skies
Filled with your stars and
Remain blissfully oblivious.
…
To the downfall
We didn’t realize
Had been building
A wall between us
All this while…
…
I don’t know why
But the grass were
Cold and crying
The dews were salty,
The chemistry we once shared
Disappeared like the
Twinkle in your eyes.
…
The wall we built in between
Made it hard for me to
Hear your voice,
To hear the various
frequencies of your
“I love you” dancing
Inside my ears.
…
But now it is done
And the wall remains
But my heart misses
Your warm embrace
In every cold morning
When wind passes by…
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Beautiful๐๐
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Thank youuuuuuuu dear โบ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
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Snaping my fingers for you
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Ohhhh really
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Yes poem is amaizing
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Aww so sweet of u to say mate ๐
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Welcome
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Reblogged this on jkjatestar.
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Fantastic like always!!
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Thank youuuuuu Priyanka for ur lovely words โบ๏ธ โค๏ธ
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Beautiful poetry…keep up great work๐๐๐
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Thank you so much Gentlemen ๐
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I always wonder how lucky these people are whom you guys mention in your poems… That feeling, that person’s memory is captured in a poem and is immoral. Stays forever๐
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Yeah kind of , but for me and my poems , she is lucky ๐
Coz she is my stargirl โค๏ธ
Thank youuuuuu dear !!
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Such a lovely collaboration. Looking forward to more such wonderful pieces.
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Thank you so much dear for your kind words โบ๏ธโค๏ธ
Means a lot to us for our future collabs !!
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Beautiful poem.<3
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Thank you so much laleh โค๏ธ
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My pleasure dear.โค๏ธ
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I like how they structured the poem. Very good your style.
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Thank you so much Gentlemen ๐
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธ
Means a lot to me !!
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very nicely written ๐๐
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Thank you so much khushboo โบ๏ธ
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธ
Means a lot to me
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I miss talking to you Bae how are you
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Aww same here Ney ๐
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Bet i miss talking to you more Lol โค Anyways I hope your doing okay?
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Yess I’m doing good
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Beautiful ๐
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Thank you so much Hannah
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธโค๏ธ
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Very beautiful dear Nirant and Adithya..you both are word magicians ๐โค
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Aww
That means a lot to us dear โค๏ธ
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธ
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Before the tumultuous end we always realize it, but don’t want to trust our intuitions .
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Yeah u right mate ๐ฏ
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธ
Means a lot to me !!
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You are most welcome
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Beautiful, i enjoyed it.
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Glad u liked it !!
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธ !!
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Your welcome, you deserve it.
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Beautifully expressed
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Thank you so much, Shantanu for ur words โบ๏ธโค๏ธ
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My absolute pleasure
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Lovely โค
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Thank you so much Sherin !!
Glad u enjoyed our collaboration !! ๐คโบ๏ธ
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Bae,I love reading your peoms
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Thank you so much dear โบ๏ธ
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I love this peom
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Glad to hear that ๐
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Your welcome
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Absolutely beautiful!๐
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Thank you so much Richa !!
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธโค๏ธ
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Bahut khub Gurav ji
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Thank you so much Dilkash Bhai โค๏ธ
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธ
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Ur welcome.
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Transition from being eachother’s everything to being strangers is a painful journey. Sad, painful yet beautiful ๐
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Yeah u said it right dear โบ๏ธ
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธ๐ค
Have a great day ahead !!
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๐ Pleasure is mine ๐ you too have a nice day ๐
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The bitter transition of falling in love and falling out of it. As usual beautifully written. I love it ๐
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Yesss just covered all in one piece and it worked out !!
Thank you so much Eva for ur kind words and constant support!! โค๏ธ
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This is the coolest short poem!
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Awww
We are glad to hear that !!
Thank you so much Ayesha for your cool words !! โค๏ธ
Means a lot to us !!
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Superb! Awesome collaboration!!
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Thank you so much
Thank you so much Kranti for ur awesome and cool words to “our” collaboration !! โค๏ธ
Glad u enjoyed our words !!
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My absolute pleasure โค๏ธ
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๐ค๐
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Soulful and touching…
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Yess it is !!
Thank you so much Geet for ur kind words โบ๏ธ๐ค
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Most welcome… my pleasure…
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A bittersweet song of love๐
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Yeahhhh dear
Glad u enjoyed it !! โค๏ธ
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธ
And wai8 , where was u ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
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Ahh you noticed?๐
Yes, well I have some academic commitments and I don’t think I’ll be able to manage regularity in my posts
I posted because I’m 3 days away from officially turning into an adult. I don’t quite know how to feel about that๐
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Hehehe after 3 days it’s blast ri8 ๐โค๏ธ
Yess I noticed
How can I forget such a beautiful soul from my zone โบ๏ธ
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Haha honoured Nirant!๐
Thaanks!!๐ธ
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Beautiful Nirant โ๏ธ๐๐
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Thank you so much Sanika โบ๏ธ
Thank you so much for your kind words
Means a lot to “us” for our future collabs !!
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Yesss ๐
Keep collaboratoring and keep blogging !!!
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Keep supporting as always โบ๏ธโบ๏ธ
Have a great day ahead !!
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Wow..
Melodious ๐
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Yesss it is !!
Thank you so much dear for your sweet words ๐โค๏ธ
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It makes me feel like ,
I am in a different zone
Whenever I read your poem
It is like a happiness,
No words for this appreciation
Good work bro.Keep it up…….
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Glad to hear that mate ๐
Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating mi work โบ๏ธ
Means a lot to me ๐
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Your poetry has magic ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐
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Aww ๐โค๏ธ
Thank you so much Sarika for ur sweet words ๐
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Is There anything that hurts than a love that was supposed to last forever And is then gone in the blink of an eye?
The pain in the words of the poet is heart moving, wrenched my heart out of it’s place. Good work!!
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Nothing pain is more that the love which is gone forever ,which was meant forever !!
Yeah true words dear ,u got it right !!
So all I’ve is to move on and take it as a blessing coz it was never meant to stay !!
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธโค๏ธ
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You’re welcome
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“I love you dancing inside my ears” – A great part of your writing. It’s hard to write about love and breaking. but you’ve done a good job.
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Yea it’s hard to cover all in one โบ๏ธ
Just tried it and it worked brilliantly !!
Thank you so much dear for your kind words โบ๏ธ
Thank you so much , means a lot to us !!
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When all I ever wanted. …oblivious…
Pretty Awesome lines
Nice Composition…
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Aww glad u liked it Perky โบ๏ธ
Thank you so much for your kind words dear โค๏ธ
Means a lot to “us” for our future collabs โบ๏ธ
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My Pleasure Nirant.
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Great collaboration! ๐๐๐ผ
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Thank you so much Winnie the Pooh ๐ป
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธ๐ค
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My pleasure, Nirant! ๐
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It’s really beautiful…๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐So so much wounderful….๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Aww
Thank you
Thank you
Thank you
Nargis ๐ for ur sweet cmnt !!
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Welcome,
Welcome,
Welcome….๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คช๐คช๐คช๐คช๐คช๐คช๐คช๐คช๐คช๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐ค ๐๐ฌ๐๐๐ค ๐๐ค๐ค๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คช๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐ค๐คช๐คช๐คช๐คช๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Ahaaaaaa now dis is what I was waiting for ๐
So much of faces
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๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คช๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐๐๐๐ค๐๐ค๐ฌ๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐คช๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐ฌ๐คฉ๐ค ๐ค ๐คช๐คฃ๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐
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๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Wonderfully poignant!
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Thank you so much sir !!
Thank you so much for your kind words and constant support !!
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You always do an awesome work.
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Hehehe just keep carving words and sometimes it works ๐
Thank you so much Sunil ๐
Thank you so much for your constant support and kind words to “our” collaboration !
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Found it relatable and great ๐๐
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Yeah coz feelings are mutual !!
Thank you so much for your kind words Mahima ๐ค
Means a lot to “us” !!
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I should say you both are the proof that collabs works well..
Such an amazing piece.. Kudos to both of you Nirant and Adi
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Awwww so sweet of you mate ๐๐ค
Thank you so much bud โบ๏ธ
Thank you so much for your kind words โบ๏ธโค๏ธ
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๐ธ๐ธ
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๐น๐น
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The chemistry and biology ๐
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Yess all went smoothly & rough !!
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Your all works made a big and then bigger fan of your…
All the best for all the future plans
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Aww so sweet of u dawg ๐ค๐๐
Thank you so much for your amazing words โบ๏ธ
Hope u enjoyed reading this !!
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Yes I enjoyed a lot
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Great !!
Hope to see ur presence in future too !!
โค๏ธ๐
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Always there for you
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Indeed very beautiful! A sense of loss and of longing. The barrier… I truly enjoyed the read. Bravo ๐
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Yess it is !!
We are happy that u enjoyed our work mate ๐
Keep supporting and smiling โบ๏ธโค๏ธ
Have a great day ahead !!
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I did enjoyed it. You both did a great job ๐โค๏ธ
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โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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The gradual collapse of chemistry along with a rising wall …..so beautifully expressed ……… bravo ๐๐ ๐๐
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Yeah just brought all the stuff in one piece and it worked !!
Thank you so much Sakshi for ur support and for ur kind words to “our” work !! โค๏ธ
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My pleasure ๐
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Ohhh! I have mixed feelings after reading this. ๐ This is soooo perfectly done. It was heart-wrenching at times. I am a bigggg admirer of your collaboratoration poems. You both add stars to each other’s works. Keep going, huh. ๐ปโค
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Aww now dis made my day ๐ญโค๏ธโค๏ธ partner !!
Glad u love our words !!
Keep supporting dear โบ๏ธ
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Haha, both of your work deserves a lot more appreciations. โบโบโค Likhte rahiye.
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Zarur jii & app humein support karte rahiyee !! ๐
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Haha, ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai? โบโบ
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๐งก๐
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A surreal yet poignant piece!
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Yess it is !!
Thank you so much dear for stopping by and appreciating “our” work !!
Means a lot !! โบ๏ธ
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Awesome as always Nice๐๐๐๐
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So good to hear that from u dear โค๏ธ
Thank you so much for your constant support to my words โบ๏ธ
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Beautiful is the word
Gud one Nirant Bhai ๐๐
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Thank you so much Nimish Bhai โบ๏ธ
Thank you so much for ur words โบ๏ธ
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๐๐
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Hope u loved it Dr.Nimish !!
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That’s an amazing collab between you and Adhi…As usual you both rocked…and this time both of you covered right from the beginning where it all started and to the end when it ended and you still missed the vibes of her.
Great collab Nirant and Adhi..best of luck for more endeavors ahead…
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Yess just wanted to cover from where it all started and how it ended ๐ค
Yess I miss the vibes of her coz she is my star girl .
The girl who has magic under her armpit ๐
Thank you so much Anamika โค๏ธ
Thank you so much for ur sweet words
Means a lot to us for our future collabs โบ๏ธ
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Missing is a part of loving too….enjoy it till lasts. And my pleasure Nirant….both of you are talented writers and we readers get.a blast when u both join to collaborate. So.shldnt we be thanking you both for such delightful works..
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So sweet of u dear โค๏ธ
Glad to have u in my zone ๐๐
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My pleasure entirely Nirant Gurav
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Marvelous work from you both ๐
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Hope u had a good time reading it brother ๐ค
Thank you so much for your kind words to “our” work !!
Have a great day ahead !!
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Aahh. This is just so beautiful. Simply aesthetic. Love it!
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We both are glad that u loved it โค๏ธ
Thank you so much Ramayani for ur kind read and sweet words ๐
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No, it’s my always my pleasure that I am able to read such beautiful pieces. โบ๏ธ
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So sweet of u dear ๐๐
Have a great day !!
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Such a great composition!
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Just tried to cover all , right where it started and how it ended ๐ !!
Thank you so much dear โค๏ธ
Thank you so much for your kind read โบ๏ธ
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“Was to imagine my skies
Filled with your stars” Such a beautiful line! Great work! Lovely poem!
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Coz she is everything ๐
Coz she is Star Girl ๐
Thank you so much Gauri ๐ค
Thank you so much for your kind words to “our” work !!
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๐๐….My pleasure!๐
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Your writing skills are awesome !! Beautiful as always๐
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Aww !! So sweet to hear that from Beautiful soul โค๏ธ
Thank you so much dear for ur sweet words to “our” work !!
Means a lot !!
Have a great day ahead !!
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A beautiful chemistry about the biology between two person’s… ๐
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Hehehe but who knewed that biology was such a comfort thing ๐
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Beautiful.๐
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Thank you so much bud โบ๏ธ
Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating “our” work !!
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Its a pleasure to read the brilliance of both of yours in a single poem.๐
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That’s so sweet of you Brother ๐๐ค
Have a great and happy Sunday !!
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๐ Same to you.
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Fabulous Nirant ๐๐๐
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Thank you so much Vasavi ๐๐
Thank you so much for your kind words .
Hope u enjoyed our words !!
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Are you kidding….I loved them ๐
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Aww I’m happy โบ๏ธ๐
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There was an abundance of enriched words ๐
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Yeaaaa just wanna cover all in one !! ๐
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Itโs a beautiful collection/ combination of mixed feelings.
It started with sweet spring …then sad….romantic …and heart touching.
Really lovely expression!!!
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Yess all about our chemistry ๐
Just wanted all in one piece and hope it worked nicely !!
Thank you so much dear !!
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