Pain, Poem, Poems

Every Shower

Every Shower was an attempt

To wash away a layer

Or two of myself.

And as the water grew hotter

My hopes grew stronger.

But nothing ever changed,

Even after the third or

Fourth shower in a day.

So I was never really sure

What swirled down the drain,

When I finally turned the water off.

_Niranโ€ .



ยฉThe Poem Zone

All Rights Reserved !!

๐ŸŽ€Happy Blogging ๐ŸŽ€

200 thoughts on “Every Shower”

      1. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
        Sleeping sleeping.
        May you meet your GF in your dreams ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‚

        Now which one’s worse..?!

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Hehehehe just run from argument with gals , coz I always loose so all I do is close my eyes and follow my mantra
        It’s …. Shantiiiii shantiiiii shantiiii


  1. I am new to the world of WordPress, I came across your poems and I must say there is something so meaningful about your writing that puts a fire in the pit of my stomach and a drive to want to share with the world what my hands are so freely awaiting to accomplish with my pen and paper! Thank you for such beautiful work. I aspire to be as genuinely free!

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Nice thought that was superbly executed.You are a natural at this. The poem flows for you like the water in the shower .Apt pauses divnisioning of thought and much more all that entices beauty. Keep up mate.

    Liked by 2 people

      1. Hahahah hope ur words stay same !!
        Wen Quality readers like u read mi work , it give me more challenge to work hard , coz expectations increase and in that most of the time many mess up ,datsy bit nervous !!

        Liked by 2 people

  3. That’s intense man!!
    And apt to say “The credit belongs to the man who’s in the arena” !! Your pain, your layers and all that infightings are all yours, and they will be there, they are supposed to be! So brother, don’t wash them off..,dance with your layers, embrace your demons and trick it with your brilliance..!! We don’t change what we are made of, rather we transform with what we have and can make out of it..!
    Take care.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 3 people

  4. Wonderfully written. I love the way you always give these subtle metaphors. Love it!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Š

    Liked by 3 people

      1. Your words shine everytime you put them into beautiful poems of yours. โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ It’s always my pleasure.

        Liked by 3 people

  5. Woww, this is so intense! Love the way you make use of words. I could actually relate to a part of it. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ Trying to wash off layers of yourself is like trying to get rid of your mistakes and everything that gives you pain, right? ๐Ÿค” Well, maybe you should try applying the forgiveness and positivity wala soap, huh. Trust me it will wash away all layers. ๐Ÿ˜น
    This is very well written, Partner. And I’m just two minutes late. ๐Ÿ˜ฌ Itna chaltaaa.

    Liked by 6 people

    1. Yeah it’s relatable coz feelings are mutual !! ๐Ÿ˜‰
      Yess the mistakes and every stuff I do in mah life !! Sure I’ll get that soap from near by medical store ๐Ÿ˜‚
      Huh , but the thing is ur late so u have lost ๐Ÿคท

      Liked by 3 people

      1. Ahaaaan!! ๐Ÿ˜ป And don’t trick me, there were no nominees for this award. It’s just me. ๐Ÿ˜‚ But I’m so overwhelmed. Thankyou Best Partnerrrr. ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

        Liked by 2 people

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s