Every Shower was an attempt
To wash away a layer
Or two of myself.
…
And as the water grew hotter
My hopes grew stronger.
…
But nothing ever changed,
Even after the third or
Fourth shower in a day.
…
So I was never really sure
What swirled down the drain,
When I finally turned the water off.
_Niran†.
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🎀Happy Blogging 🎀
Love your words! 🌷
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Thank you dear 🌹
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It’s my pleasure Nirant! 😊
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deep .i love it. 😊
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Glad to hear that !!
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Nice words.
I also write poems and would love to have your suggestions on it. Please check my blog : http://www.alienicpoems.wordpress.com
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Thank you so much dear !!
Sure I’ll give a visit !! (•‿•)
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You are a competition to the world of words..! The Legendary Competition..!
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Now dis means a lot to me by beautiful girl ❤️
A big wave of thank youuuuuuuu Neha 🖤
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A big my pleasure wave to you.. 😊
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☺️☺️have a lovely sleep 💤💤
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Definitely.. Today’s world sleep day..!
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Ohhh ha kya ,
Happy sleep day 😴😴
Wishing at ri8 time 😉
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Happy sleep day buddy.. I am so gonna celebrate it..! 😂
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Hahaha
Sleep sleep
May bed bugs bite ur hairs 🤐🤭
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😂😂😂😂
Sleeping sleeping.
May you meet your GF in your dreams 😉😂
Now which one’s worse..?!
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Hehe dis one was really worse
Now I’m may get nightmares 😼😼😼😼😼
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😂😂😂😂
Good luck with those..!
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Hehehe fingers crossed🤞🤞
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Nope.. Not mine..! 😂😂😂
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Hahahaha 😼😼😼
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😂😂😂😂😂
Are we referring to your ex- or your present? 😅
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Lol maybe both 😼but now I want my future to start in dream so my love (bed) is calling me 😹
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Oh my god..! You are tough.. Have a good night..!
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Hehehehe just run from argument with gals , coz I always loose so all I do is close my eyes and follow my mantra
It’s …. Shantiiiii shantiiiii shantiiii
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Thanks for that.. I’ll need it..!
Shantiii shantiiii shantiii
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Coool cya soon in dreams ☺️🤭
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Not really I am meeting my special in my dreams.. You meet yours..!
Have gooood time.. Cya..
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Coool cya !!
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Cya..!!
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I am new to the world of WordPress, I came across your poems and I must say there is something so meaningful about your writing that puts a fire in the pit of my stomach and a drive to want to share with the world what my hands are so freely awaiting to accomplish with my pen and paper! Thank you for such beautiful work. I aspire to be as genuinely free!
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Aww dats great words by Amazing soul ❤️
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
Glad to have you in mi zone 🎀
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Nice to meet you nirant
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Glad to have such a beautiful soul in my zone ❤️
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😀😀
Did you follow this blog
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Yess dear. I’m following this blog !!
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😊😊😊
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🤝
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Oh… So nice
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This was lovely!
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Yeah just washing out the bad layers !!
Thank you so much moushmi for ur kind words ☺️
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Lovely expression
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Yeah just want to wash away all the bad layers !!
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Nice to meet you
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Thank you 😊
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Did you follow
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Yess dear 🙃
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Yes
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Thank you😊😊😊
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This was truly amazing man
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Thank you so much Gentlemen 🎀
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Awesome as always 👍💕
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Thank you so much ❤️
Thank you so much for your sweet words mate 😊
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Why don’t you follow my new blog?
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The link is not opening only !!
Do one thing , u follow me and I’ll follow u back !!
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https://triarianiindah.com
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Ok just commenta it
I will repair it first
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Yeah sure and send me follow so I can follow u back okay ???
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Nice thought that was superbly executed.You are a natural at this. The poem flows for you like the water in the shower .Apt pauses divnisioning of thought and much more all that entices beauty. Keep up mate.
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Yeah natural coz I write my heart out with every words !!
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️ 🖤
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Did you follow https://triarianiindah.com
My new blog
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I’ll follow but don’t keep hitting likes unnecessarily
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Thank you so much dear
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Ok…thank so much
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❤️❤️
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Well penned 👌
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Thank you so much jyoti ❤️
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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I like your writing style Nirant…it’s just awesome 😊
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Aww great to hear that from beautiful soul like u dear ☺️ ❤️
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Well penned ! Superbbb !
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Thank you so much Jyo
But not superb than ur dishes 😉
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Yayyyy !😉😀👍
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☺️☺️
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Great poem… 👌amazing…keep blogging and have a great day
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Thank you so much sir for ur kind words ☺️
Have a great day to you too !!
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Dude…😍😍the best I read today💕 crazilyamazingo beautifully penned🌼
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Aww dats so sweet to hear from u preeya ☺️💕
Thank youuuuuu dear for ur sweet and lovely words !!
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Beautiful!
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Thank youuuuuu so much Pragalbha ❤️
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
Means a lot to me !!
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You are very welcome!
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☺️☺️
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Wow, beautifully penned!!
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Thank you so very much dear Kranti ❤️
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My absolute pleasure ❤️
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WOW.. Absolutely brilliant!❤️
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Thank youuuuuu Richa !!
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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Reblogged this on The Shubham Stories and commented:
EveryShower…by #Nirant
Must watch this beautiful poetry 💖
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Aww
Heartily Thank you for ur sweet gesture mate !!
Stay blessed and happy !!
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awsme…👌👌👌
very interesting
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Thank you so much shubham ❤️
Thank you so much for your kind read ☺️
Means a lot to me !!
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A poem for reflection. Well written.
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Yes sir !!
Thank you so much for your kind words !!
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This was awesome Nirant🙌☮️
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Thank you dear !!
Thank you so much for your kind read ☺️.
#goodvibesOnly
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This is brilliant, Nirant! Beautifully penned. 😊
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Thank youuuuuu Winnie 💕.
Glad u enjoyed it !!
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My pleasure, Nirant! I really love the metaphor. 😊
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Great to hear that dear ☺️
Have a blessed Monday 😇
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Have a blessed Monday too! 😇🙏🏼
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☺️☺️
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Deep!
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Thank you sir !!
Glad u like it 😊
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Beautifully written 🌸🌸💕💕
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Thank you so much dear ❤️
Thank you so much for your kind read !!
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You’re so welcome my friend. Hope your Sunday was amazing. Good night. Thank you too🌸🌼💕
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Yeesssss it was ,what about u ??
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Nicely written
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Thank you so much, Shantanu !!
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my pleasure
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Well penned.
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Thank you so much Muntazir !!
Hope u enjoyed reading it !!
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Beautiful and witty.
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Thank you 😊
Thank you so much for your kind read !!
Means a lot to me for my future writings !!
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Your poems are beautiful. I am sure the future will not change that.
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Hahahah hope ur words stay same !!
Wen Quality readers like u read mi work , it give me more challenge to work hard , coz expectations increase and in that most of the time many mess up ,datsy bit nervous !!
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Oh, that’s so nice of you to say. Know I am here to read you every week 🙂
Take good care of you, my friend!
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Aww sure dear !
Utop stay blessed and happy !!
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You too!
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☺️☺️
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Thanks for the lovely update.
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Just wrote my heart out , Gentlemen !!
Thank you so much for your kind words !!
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It’s my pleasure.
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Gratitude 🙌
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Wao! So beautifully you hv written…. Awesome!
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Thank you so much Tanusri ma’am !!
Thank you so much for your kind read ☺️
Means a lot to me !!
Have a lovely Sunday with ur loved ones !!
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How are you tanuri
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Lovely play with words!
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Thank you so much Indira ma’am !!
Hope u enjoyed reading it !!
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That’s intense man!!
And apt to say “The credit belongs to the man who’s in the arena” !! Your pain, your layers and all that infightings are all yours, and they will be there, they are supposed to be! So brother, don’t wash them off..,dance with your layers, embrace your demons and trick it with your brilliance..!! We don’t change what we are made of, rather we transform with what we have and can make out of it..!
Take care.. 🙂
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Now dis is a wise words by Amazing Gentlemen like u ❤️
Thank you so much mate for ur kind words !!
Yess we transform !! 🙌🙌
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😀 😀!! You’re most welcome Dude..🤝☺️
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Glad to have u in mi zone 🎀 dawg !!
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🤜🤛😉
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🤜🤛
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Wonderful metaphor… You just know how to use words to attract your readers…
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Thank you so very much bruh !!
Haha , just learning 😉❤️
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Amazing 👌… whistles…
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Ohhhhh
1st time I got whistles to my writing 🤭💕
Thank you so much dear !!
Ur kind words and beautiful whistle means a lot to me !!
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Nicely penned! 😉
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Thank you
Thank you so much bruh !! 🙌
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Lovely penned
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Thank you so much Sara ❤️
Glad u liked it !!
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Intensified laconic verse with strong Metaphors justifying
‘Showers and Layers’ 👌❤
Keep going bruh !✌
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I’m just glad to hear this words from amazing soul like u bruh 💯
Thank you so much for your kind read !!
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Wow! That comment just made my day 😇
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🤜🤛
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Beautifully written, painfully expressed.
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Hope u enjoyed reading it man !!
Thank you so much for your kind read ☺️
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Yes I did. 😊
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🤜🤛
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Wonderful metaphor as usual! And I love some of the comments too! Between awards, runner ups, first place, second ones, etc., I had a good laugh!😉😊🤗
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Thank you so very much dear for stopping by and appreciating mi work ☺️
Hehehe , yea just chit chats with higly innovative brain 😂
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It’s painful!
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Yess it is !!
Waiting for monsoon to wash them out 😂
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Metaphor is good
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Glad u liked it !!
Thank you so much dear ❤️
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This is beautiful but very sad! Please, you are worthy of everything God has for you.
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Yess just to wash all my layers and yess , god has his plan for everyone !!
Thank you so much mate for stopping by and appreciating mi work ☺️
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I told you you are one of my 5 favore people. I will pray for you separately.
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Aww dear
I’m feeling blessed to meet u 😊❤️
Ur just beautiful soul ☺️
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NOT but, Thank you
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Yess you are dear !!
I’m glad to have u in my zone 🎀
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me too, as well
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😊😊
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Wonderfully written. I love the way you always give these subtle metaphors. Love it!❤️❤️😊
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Yess just try get it more innovative and attractive to get my words shine ✨😉
And I’m glad that u loved it !!
Thank youuuuuu !!
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Your words shine everytime you put them into beautiful poems of yours. ☺️☺️ It’s always my pleasure.
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So sweet to hear that from u dear ❤️
Have a lovely Sunday ahead with ur loved ones !!
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😊😊 Have a nice day too!
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So relatable. Well penned 🤗🌸
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Yeaaa Jessy coz feelings are mutual , aren’t they ??
Thank you so much dear !!
Have a lovely Sunday !!
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They are..
Of course!!
Thanks!! Same to you!
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🤜🤛❤️
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Nice one dude!
Tap water won’t do the work, let the rain wash away those layers😁
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Yeah just waiting for monsoon to get that layers off , coz I heard that 1st rain wash away all the layers 😉❤️
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Woww, this is so intense! Love the way you make use of words. I could actually relate to a part of it. 😮 Trying to wash off layers of yourself is like trying to get rid of your mistakes and everything that gives you pain, right? 🤔 Well, maybe you should try applying the forgiveness and positivity wala soap, huh. Trust me it will wash away all layers. 😹
This is very well written, Partner. And I’m just two minutes late. 😬 Itna chaltaaa.
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Yeah it’s relatable coz feelings are mutual !! 😉
Yess the mistakes and every stuff I do in mah life !! Sure I’ll get that soap from near by medical store 😂
Huh , but the thing is ur late so u have lost 🤷
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Huhhh. 😧 Two minutes are considerable naa. Don’t do thiss. Give me award.
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Lol naaaa
And u saying about award ??
I’ve category of loosing the challenge award , should I nominate u for that 🤭
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I won’t come here again fir. Give me second runner up or something. 😒😒
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Aww , someone is angry 😂😂😂
And please don’t stop coming here , I’ll feel ur absence of long long appreciation on my words ☺️
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Huhhh. Ab toh nahi aayenge. Okay bye. Miss my presence. ☺☺☺
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What 😟
No huh , ur a lovely person who always support my writing
And yess I’ve a award for u 😁
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Haan kya? Give me award, then we will talk. 😺😺
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Okay so award which u got is …!!!
The “Amazing partner award” 💙🧡
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Ahaaaan!! 😻 And don’t trick me, there were no nominees for this award. It’s just me. 😂 But I’m so overwhelmed. Thankyou Best Partnerrrr. 💙🧡
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Yess just you , coz there is no competitor for u 😁😁
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Ohhho! Shukriyaaa. 😹😹😹
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💙🧡
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🧡💙
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So nice.Gaurav ji
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Shukriya janab 🙌❤️
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Swagat Janab.
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Beautifully penned 👏
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Thank you so much Mahi ❤️
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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😊😊
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Beautiful Metaphor… Nirant I just took a two day off just to shed my negativity… apt for my situation… Keep it up bro…
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Hope ur good now and came back strongly mate !!
Thank you Ameet for ur kind read ☺️
Have a lovely Sunday with ur family ❤️
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Am a little better… so off to work today… have to make up for lost time and work
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Great enjoy the work u do Gentlemen 👍
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