Love Poem, Pain, Poems

Bacteria

She loved hard…

And that was the issue .

Instead of appreciating her,

He took her love and crumbled it into a paper ball.

And threw it off into the air ,

With no direct place to land …

She lost herself .

She no longer knew how to love

Love was a foreign bacteria in her mouth.

It was a disease…

The day he left, she could no longer breathe …!!

_Niranโ€ .

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251 thoughts on “Bacteria”

      1. And as per me
        Love is a felling that just goes beyond these four letters. It is a feeling that is inherent in every thing that breathes. It is the essense of life. It is the blood that runs through our veins to keep us alive. The oxygen that is being utilised to keep our organs working. A nector that gives us immorality in someone’s heart. I can go on and on but just to let you know, you might be right and the patients must be treated with shock therapy.

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  1. Its sad and painful but the last lines “Love was a foreign bacteria in her mouth.
    It was a diseaseโ€ฆ
    The day he left, she could no longer breathe” says the amount of love it holds. Awesome ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Aww dear
      I’m really wai8 for ur words to come on my blog coz ur words just pump me up to write more & more with deep meaning โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ
      A big thank you for ur constant support !!

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  2. Oh, this hurts so bad. ๐Ÿ˜”
    You write reallly well, and I’m so happy to see you bring new concepts into your poems, like this biology one, hehe.
    Keep going ji. ๐Ÿ‘ฆ And I’ll bring you one mask, stay away from this love-bacteria. ๐Ÿ˜น

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    1. Yess partner it’s bad disease !!
      Well yeah just tried to relate it with disease coz I think love is a disease only ๐Ÿ˜ท?
      Sure ji, great get me that mask so I can stay away from all disease
      Hygenic boi in the town ๐Ÿ‘ฆโ™‚๏ธ

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      1. Whattttttttttt ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ permanent๐Ÿ™‰
        Oh dear
        Den get me that mask ri8 now ,coz u know ,it’s all about …
        Me myself and I,solo ride until I die ๐Ÿ™ƒ

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  3. Ah! This hurts Nirant! Tragic but very true!

    P.S You are among the first 3 to visit my blog every time i post something. Missed your visit yesterday and wondered why?
    Hope all is well with you?

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    1. Yess it’s tragic and it hurts no matter what !!
      Happy that u got mi words dear !!
      Thank you so much !!
      Sorry I’m running behind and missed some if the post ,
      I’ve read it and I loved blank pages !!

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      1. Thank you …And did I mention that you somehow seem to GET what a girl/woman goes through in a bad relationship. Its a rare thing…to be able to put yourself in someone else’s shoes and write their side of the story. It can only be God’s Grace that you have this amazing blessing!! May His grace continue to be showered on you …and may you keep creating such BEAUTIFUL words…Touchwood!

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