Driving home and the stars are bright
I remember you said you like to watch them too .
I wonder if they are shining down on you .
Where you are ?
So far away from me .
I’m missing you , wishing you were here .
But I can’t find a way to feel close to you .
So I hop in the backseat of my car where you once kissed me so beautifully and stargaze alone !!
_Niranβ .
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So Deep!
Very adorable β€β€
So have you find her?
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Maybe in future I’ll π
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Good Luck! π
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Tenkuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu π§‘ π
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The feeling here’s mine too
Good one
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Feelings are mutual brother π―
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Wonderful poem
It’s expected as your talent is Nirant
Do check out my blog too
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Thank you so much dear for your kind words βΊοΈβ€οΈ
Sure I’ll mate π
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Thank you too π
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Thank you Maysa π
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Amazing
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Love this. Digging deep and reminiscing.
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Yeah longing says it all !!
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This is beautiful, it genuinely evokes a deep feeling in me. Great post! π
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Yess love Yourself mate β€οΈ
Glad u enjoyed reading !!
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This was a really crisp piece!!! Please check out mine too :))
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Thank you mate
Sure I’ll !
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Wowwww
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Glad u loved it Insiya β€οΈ
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Nice
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Thank you !!
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Sure mate I’ll look into it as soon as possible, as other Nominations are pending too !!
And Thank you so much for Nominating me β€οΈ
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πππ Nirant is this any kinda Prem Rog? BTW BEAUTIFUL π AS ALWAYS
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Hehehehe u can say it ππ
Tenkuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu π€ haryani
Mention not !! π
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πππβ€ It’s cute.
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πjust like u lil
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Touching π€
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Yess it is !!
Thank you for stopping by and appreciating mi work βΊοΈ
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Short n crisp!
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Yayy dear
Thank you for stopping by and appreciating mi work βΊοΈ
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Always pleasure for your work buddy!! (as you say!π )
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Haha π
Have a lovely day !!
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Thanks!! Happy Sunday!β₯οΈ
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I nominated you
https://mwsrwritings.com/2019/05/04/sunshine-blogger-nomination-accepted/
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Thank you so much dear for Nominating me
Surely I’ll look into it !!
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You are welcome
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This was beautiful!π
Also, I’ve nominated you for the mystery blogger award. Hope you would participate!π
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Thank you dear !!
Oh Thank you again for Nominating me for this award !!
Surely I’ll look into it as other Nominations are pending too !! (ββΏβ)
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Anytime mate… will be waiting to read your answersπ
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βΊοΈcoool !!
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Beautifully written, Nirant. The poem starts of hopeful, and then it takes a turn for a sense of longing. Life can be hard and we can’t always be around who we want to be. But we can always dream and hope π
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Yess actually mate it can be hard and it will always be hard and we just have to enjoy the moment before it turn out to memories qββΏβq
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Nothing like enjoying the moment…enjoy the good time and keep calm during the challenging times π
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Yessss Mabel βΊοΈ
Have a great day/Night ahead !!
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Very nice
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Thank you
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As people go away, they leave behind painful voids in our lives! Then we have no choice left,but to bask in that pain and care for our hearts! I could feel every single word in this piece! Great post!π
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Yess actually mate, we just have that memories which we created !! And just move on !!
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So true!! Those memories are the happiest refuge on sad days but the most painful medicines on the happier ones!
Break ups aren’t fun! Damn! π
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Haha yess they aren’t π
I think we just have to enjoy the moments before it turn out to memories ?
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Agreed! Need to enjoy those moments for sure, because love fades away and then you are just left with all the memories!!π
I am sorry
I am being a wimp in your comment section.π
Your post took me somewhere!ππ
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Hahaha it’s okay , I loved it β€οΈ
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Haha! I am glad! βΊοΈ
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Have a great day ahead bud (ββΏβ)
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You too buddy!π
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Beautifully written!β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you dear richa π
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Lovely! So wistful.
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Thank you mate (ββΏβ)
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Nice
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Thank you Miss MJ (β βΏβ)
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short lines expressing detailed and deep thoughts π
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Yesss actually mate π
Thank you man π
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I love it ππππ
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Aww
Thank you so much dear π(β βΏβ)
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Your poem reminds of a line which I read somewhere I don’t remember. It is, “Even if we are miles away, atleast we are looking at the same sky. And that’s equivalent to an eye contact, just a bit more romantic”
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Oh wow what a line , I’ve never heard dis before !!
And thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating mi work βΊοΈ
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Pleasure, always. π
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Oh. I am here only. π
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Hasshhh u here only , mi search is over (β βΏβ)π
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I like the concision, the beauty and the depth of your poem, Nirant. You deal with the most universal topics such as love, desire and loneliness. Well penned.
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Yess it’s my genre of love and beauty of women π
And ur words always inspire me to write more more β€οΈ
Thank youuuuuuuu
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My pleasure.
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A question many of us asked… a feeling many of us felt!! π
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Actually (ββΏβ) ma’am !!
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Beautiful
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Thank you
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Absolutely beautiful!!
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Thank you dear Kranti β€οΈ
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Short and sweet! π
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Thank youuuuuuuu dear (Κα΄ΚβΏ)
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Hi, your blog is amazing! I have nominated you for Sunshine Blogger Award.
https://wordsforlifebyalisha.wordpress.com/2019/04/29/sunshine-blogger-award
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Aww glad to hear that bud βΊοΈ
Thank you so much for Nominating me for this award !!
Surely I’ll look into it ,as other Nominations are pending too !!
Thank you again (Κα΄ΚβΏ)
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Haha! Sure! You’re welcome
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Nicely written! So deep
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Thank you Bhai πβ€οΈ
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Beautiful piece
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Thank you so much dear β€οΈ
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So so so lovely πβ€β€β€π
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Awwww dear
Thank youuuuuuuu (ββΏβ)
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Awesome ! Loved it ! How u write this magical ??
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Aww
Thank you (ββΏβ)
I write this kind of magic just by thinking of her π !!
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Deep and beautiful β€οΈ
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Thank youuuuuuuu dear π
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That longingness beautifully described
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Thank you so much, Shantanu !!
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My absolute pleasure
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(β’βΏβ’)
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This is lovely π
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So u are !!
Thank you so much mate for ur kind words βΊοΈ
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Hey you are born to do this brother
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Actually Brodie !!
Thank you for stopping by !!
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So romantic .
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π Thank you dear
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What to say , this is just so so so beautiful
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Awww ur quitness said all dear β€οΈβ€οΈ
Thank youuuuuuuu very much !!
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Beautiful thoughts of love…
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Thank you ma’am π
Glad u loved dis thoughts !!
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Nice one, Nirant!
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Thank you so much Anupriya (β’βΏβ’)
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Beautiful! Love this π
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Heyaaa
Thank you so much dear ββΏβ
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Amazingπ
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Thank youuuuuuuu Bhai β€οΈβΊοΈ
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I love this, Niran!
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Glad to hear that Eliah β€οΈ
Thank you so much dear for your kind words βΊοΈ
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Last two lines are classic as ever… Nirant lovely…
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(β βΏβ) yesss mate
Thank you Ameet β€οΈ
Hope u enjoying the election heat π
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Loving this heat
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Cooool β₯οΈ
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A way to feel someone’s presence when they are not around ……tale of a heart longing to meet it’s beat β€οΈπ
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Actually !!
Thank you so much, Sakshi π
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My pleasure
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You did so good expressing.
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Ur words means a lot !!
Thank you so much Rupali β€οΈ
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Beautifully penned β€οΈ
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Hey
Thank you Mahi β€οΈ
Hope u enjoyed it (β βΏβ)
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Yeah π
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Star gazing and moon gazing are my favourites π there something so serene and romantic about it π Loved the poem π
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Well same pinch π
Feeling & missing her is romantic ,shows the dedication β€οΈ
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Trueπ
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It’s seems realistic π
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Yeaaa just try to show it realistic π
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Wowww!!!!
You explained a love story in many few words…. Such a incredible post. Very well written, Nirant bhau!
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Hey jatin
I’m really happy u got mi words ri8 β€οΈ
Thank you so much Bhau π€
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Ohhh c’mon!
It’s my pleasure
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You say a lot in so few words!
Absolutely beautiful β€
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Glad u liked it mate βΊοΈ
Thank you so much for ur constant support to my writing !!
Means a lot to me for mi future writings π
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Reblogged this on The Shubham Stories.
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Oh dear
Thank you for ur sweet gesture !!
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welcome π
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So deep and beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.
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Glad u enjoyed reading it mate π
Thank youuuuuuuu so much π
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wonderful πππ
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Thank you so very much shubham Bhai (β’βΏβ’)
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Woahhh! Mesmerizing, this is. Beautifully done, Partner. β₯οΈπ
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Hey hiee
Yess it is !!
Thank you so much partenr π§‘ π
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Pleasure always for beautiful stuff, mate. π€£
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^_^
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Wah Nirant..Kya baath Hein. Amazing this is. Short … Crisp and breath taking.
Good Sunday to you Nirant…
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Hey
Thank youuuuuuuu Anamika β€οΈ
Great and lovely Sunday to u too !!
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Pleasure Nirant… π
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(Κα΄ΚβΏ)
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That’s so deep.π
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Just searching her !! π
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I hope you find her real soon!
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Yep let’s see !!
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I wish you the best!
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