Love Poem, Pain, Poem

Away from you

I think of thoughts

That cannot be,

No hand can reach across this sea.

The seasons change on distant shores,

From frosty skies

To sunshine blue,

As summer’s touch

Undresses you !!

Reminding me of all the things I often wish,

But cannot do !!

_Niran†.

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198 thoughts on “Away from you”

  1. They say the true Love dosen’t stay…the true love is about persons who go away from us…the true love .. dosen’t stay..but leaves memories for a lifetime…so Smile, because Once,You found the true love…maybe You are the sun,and She ‘s the moon,but even they can be seen together in the Same Sky sometimes,they still there…so close but so far!🙈💗😀😊😉

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      1. You deserve every single word,because You have a big heart…Never loose that part of You,even Your heart is broken,or tired,or happy or sad…remember this:STILL BEATS!So never give up…😀😀💗💗

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  2. I could totally relate! You just end up wishing for a lot of things, thinking about the person you love, but you’re helpless because of the distance, both physical and emotional!
    Beautiful and soulful words!💕

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      1. I agree! There are days when I wake up thinking about him (today is one of them) and then I just spend the entire day being sad over the separation!(◕︵◕)
        The pleasure is all mine Mr. Not-so-silent!😁
        Have a great day ahead!💕

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      2. Yeah actually 😂
        Well I’m all in rap and em is mi love ❤️
        Well in Punjabi if u say den I’ve two songs which I listen nowadays are
        Mere Wala sardar and khabb 💕 and I’m all in English and fav one is , u r the reason and locked away !!
        Wab urs ??????

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      3. Hell yeah!😎
        Yeah! Even i find rap cool! Nicki Minaj is my love!❤️
        In Punjabi, I listen to rabbi Shergill a lot! Old songs, like “bulla ki Jaana main kaun” and “challa”! Yeah ! I am quite into Sufi songs!😅😅
        My fav in English are, “Him and I” and I can’t stop listening to “mirrors” from Justin Timberlake!😃😃
        (✿◠‿◠)

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      4. Ohhh god , rabb , Jesus , Deva ,
        Ur so same same , I’ve all mi love stored for Nicki 🙈😍
        Aayee hayee suffi I’ve heard it it’s quite good to listen !!
        And mirrors that was the one I use to hear a lot pehlee jii !!
        Btw good selection of songs huh
        Manaa padega

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      5. Haha! Seriously! We are so so similar!
        ヾ(@⌒▽⌒@)ノ
        Arrey! Wow! Same pinch for the Nicki love!😎😎
        Yeah! Suffi is perfect for quiet evenings!❤️
        Haha! Even I used to listen to that before, ab phir se aadat lag gayi!😅😂
        Hey! Thanks! You too! 😃
        Aur daso! Kidda??

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      6. Yessss same same (◕ᴗ◕✿)
        Yeah u right it’s for quiet evening and yaha Mumbai mein quitenss ufff it’s naa ke barabar hai (´;︵;`)
        Ki dasuuu jii ,app boloo are u social media ??? Or just wp ?????
        Coz ppl listen here 🤫dewaroon ke bhi kaan hotee hai 😨lol

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      7. (◕‿◕✿)(◠‿◠✿)
        Haha! I know! Metro cities and quietness, no match!😂😂
        See! I am not a big fan of social media toh iss waqt toh sirf wp aur Insta hi hai!
        Insta bhi sirf site ke liye shuru Kiya!😅😅
        Haha! Ji dewaaron ke kaan Bohot tez hote hain!😂😂

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