I thought I could hold you
Mix you with water : mud
Engraved with my knuckles
But distance dried me out
And I felt the last of you crumble.
I held out my hands,
And walked into the sea
So the salt could wash away your sand !!
_Niran†.
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Oh, and how easy it is to crumble. Lovely poem!
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Yesss coz distance always make us cry at certain moment !
Thank you mate
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Got to read one of your masterful stroke. Tq
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Glad to hear that from Beautiful soul like u ❤️
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Epic sad love
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Coz distance plays vital role
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Yes it does. Many have broken up because the distance ‘dried them up’ like you wrote 😊
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Yess actually pradita
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😊😊
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Amazing like always. Fantabulous work Pal 👌
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Thank youuuuuuuu bud ❤️❤️
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This is absolutely golden
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Glad u enjoyed reading it ❤️
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My pleasure always
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That last line is gorgeous ❤️
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Yayyyy
Thank you dear 💕
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My pleasure Nirant 😊 would appreciate if you
Extend your support to my new blog http://www.thesoulfulness.wordpress.com
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Sure I’ve opened ur site but it’s not showing any kind of button to follow u !!
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Scroll down ….a follow button is at the bottom
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Okay I’ll check
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Very deep, very emotional, very true. Love the way you put the emotions in beautiful words.
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Yess coz dis distance always have some deep stuff hidden in it which society or others don’t understand except our heart 💔
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This is fabulous! 👌👌
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Thank you manic 💕💕
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#longdistancefails
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#notActually depends upon the trust & situation !!
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Yeah! I meant it as in labeling this as an instance in which it has failed. But yeah, long distance doesn’t always fail :3
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Yeah exactly !!
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Pleasure to read!
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So sweet to hear ❣️❣️
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Beautiful imagery!
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Thank you dear Chocoviv 💕💕
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You’re welcome!
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🌷😍😍😍
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👦🏻💕💕
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A lot unspoken in a few lines, superb 👌 👌
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Yessss coz distance always make me fade !!
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Hey! I have nominated you for the Liebster award. Please check my latest blog post for more.
Good luck with your blog 🙂
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Thank you so much mate ❤️
And it’s Nirant 😂
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Amazing poem I love it!
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Thank you dear 💕
Glad u loved it
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😊
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Beautifully penned as always! 😊💕
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Thank youuuuuuuu Winnie the Pooh💕💕
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You’re welcome, Nirant my friend! I really love my pet name. 😃💕🌺
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Hihihihi coz I kept that 😁
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Hmm…good!
BTW, I do not comment on posts, who do not visit mine…may be this is an exception 😀 😀
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Areyyyyyyyyyy ma’am
I do visit , just some hectic schedule at work ,
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Wowww! Amazing lines …… The way U put down the words….. it’s so deep & lovely….It been honour to have read your poems….thankss for sharing…
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Awwww
Dat means a lot to me dear ❤️❤️
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️❤️
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Such a khubsuraat poem😂😂
Seriously a beautiful poem😄💜💜
Loved it😍💐
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खूबसूरती को कागज़ पे लिखना आपसे ही सिखा हूँ 😍😁
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Aap jesa etna khubsuraat toh nhi likh paayenge🌼💐
How do you come up with such sentences haa😂😂
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Just aivyeeee heeee aagayi 👦🏻😁
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Aacha😂
But you really write very good poems😁🌸
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Tenkuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 🧡 💙
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You are welcome😁
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💕
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This is beautiful ❤
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Thank you dear ❤️🎀
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Wowwww! What a incredible post. The great sea of love knowledge is present in your mind….
I can understand a deep mean of this one
Nice post, Nirant Bhau!
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Wow great words bhau
Thank you for ur kind time and kind words !!
Means a lot to me !!
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It’s my pleasure, bhau !!
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☺️☺️
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Wow-healing ❤
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Yaay Sadia ❤️
Thank you !!
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Most welcome! 😊😊
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❤️❤️
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Splendid post!
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Glad u loved it ☺️
Thank you dear
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Nice one
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Thank you sir ❤️
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Woahh! This poem of yours created such a beauuuutiful image! ❤ There’s so much pain here. Also, the sand and mud wala concept is very unique. Very well written, huh. 🐝👊
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Ohohohoh look who’s back , Firefly is back 😍😍😍😍😍
Thank you so much jii for ur words ☺️
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Hehe, sorrry for being so late. 😹 It’s always a pleasure to read your work. ❤ Abi saare posts padhti ruko.
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Ohoh sure sure padhoooo
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Speactular, scholarly verse…
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Yessss right !!
Thank you for ur words ❤️
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This is splendid. 👏
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Thank you mate ❤️❤️
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my pleasure
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☺️☺️
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Here’s nirant again with fabulous, beautiful and spectacular rhymes.
Loved it 😍❤
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Hihihi
Here she is with her words to motivate me to write like dis 😍
Thank you dear☺️
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Haha !! Just saying the truth, Mr N 😎
It’s my absolute pleasure, Mr N 😎
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Thank you Mrs. Motivating gal 😁
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Not Mrs 😏
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😂😂😂okay lil gal
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Now not that little and u should Ms instead of Mrs 😁
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Okay Ms lil 😂
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Haha !!! Ms lil good Mr N 🤣
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Hihihihi 😂
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Hahahahahaha 😂😅
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