‘ You know how I got these scars? , ‘
he asked.
‘ From me loving you too much ? ,’
She guessed.
‘ No. I got these scars from wounds inflicted by lies like you telling me you loved me too much. ‘
_Niranโ .
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I can relate!
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Coz feelings are mutual
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Sometimes because feelings felt it’s essence should be out shined at right moment as exact moment lighten up love more whomsoever you share that love with and they too felt it.๐
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True that and wise words !!
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Scars from wounds Inflicted by lies like you by telling me you loved me too much… quite hard to say isn’t it๐
Awesome creation. Keep going bud๐
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Yeah maybe , but not all lies are bitter !!
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BAM!
There it is.
I love it.
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Glad to hear that mate ๐
Thank you
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Its a nice work
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Thank you mate
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Aha – love this one
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Thank you dear
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My pleasure
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Ouch
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Hmmmmmm ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ
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Heartfelt and heartbreaking ๐๐๐
Nicely expressed
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Yesssss words are heartbreaking coz heart has already experienced it in more bitter way Dan dis ๐
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On point๐
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Thank you ๐
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That is true and amazing! How do you come up with this stuff?
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Coz mi heart experienced it ๐
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โคโค
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tragic…
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Love games are always !!
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Heartfelt!โค๏ธ
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Thank you โค๏ธ
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Hi Nirant, I nominated you for Sunshine blogger award. Plz do check the link below.
https://happinessinn.blog/2019/11/13/sunshine-blogger-award-%f0%9f%8c%bb/
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Thank you dear for nominting me
I’ll look into it as soon as possible !!
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Lmao ๐ ๐๐
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Ouch ๐
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Hmmmmmm๐๐ปโโ๏ธ
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Nirant Nirant !! It felt !! This was damn good !! Loved reading them โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ
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So sweet to hear that from u dear โค๏ธ
Means a lot to me !!
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Haha ! You have made a rhyme here too๐ “So sweet to hear that from you dear”
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Hehehehehehehehr
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Aaah touched my heart. Sad but true. ๐
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Glad mi words are touching !!
Bitter truth of modern love story !!
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Feeling of bitter truth!๐ผ
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Actually !!
But truth is truth , accept and move onn , dats what life is !!
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Yea you are right Nirant! Have a great day !!! ๐
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Yayyy wish u d same !!
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Ohh
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๐
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I love how you express feelings with such a beautiful simplicity. In love with this.
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I’m glad to hear that pretty soul like u mate !!
Thank you for your kind read and sweet words !!
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It’s a pleasure sir๐
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Lol u can go with Nirant rather Dan going with sir , it sounds weird !!
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Haha๐ I have received various comebacks on being addressed as sir and this is by far the best one!
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Hihihihihi ๐๐
I’m still lame 22 ๐ค๐คญ
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And I’m still lame 13๐๐
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Oh 13 and already in this blogging world , dats fantastic man , u will have a bright future hommie !!
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Hehee, thank you Nirant!๐And I wish the same for you๐
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Have a great day ahead !!
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I’m having one. You too have a merry day. Carpe Diem.๐
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Tusii Delhi nuu kudii ???
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No no, Mumbaikar all the way๐
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Oh same pinch , Santacruz and u ?
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Malad. However I hope you don’t mind me asking what made you think that I’m from Delhi..
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No coz gursahani surname are mostly from delhite only , I was there for decades so got dis weird question lol
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Oh no, it was a perfectly interesting question. I didn’t know about it. All I know is that surnames ending with ‘ani’ are mostly Sindhis or Gujaratis. And I am Sindhi, though basic Gujarati is known by almost everyone in the city๐ what about you?
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I’m kind of mix breed ๐๐ mom is Punjabi and dad is Maharashtrain
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Interesting indeed.. they’re actually my favourite kind of breeds😂😂😅
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This hit me in the feels
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Yessss afterall feelings are mutual !!
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A very sad version of the love story…
Frankly too negative…
Add a positive version to it too…
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Every love story has bitter version , we just have to accept it and go with the flow ๐ป
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