We start the night as strangers
In a cold tight bed.
The sun kind enough to hide
Us from our exposed backsides:
Yep warm walls
In a cold tight bed.
Phantom passion too weak to climb
And unaccustomed to the force time of a first night.
Warm slumber upon us:
Like Sibblings we sleep.
Strangers no more.
The sun return unashamed at what it hears:
It’s children’s light snores.
_Niran†.
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Hi Nirant! I loved these pictures!
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Hey hiee
Thank you mate !!
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Heartwarming poem! 😊❤️
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Glad u loved it !! 🌹
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Indeed! 😊
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Sweet one Nirant.. Love it..
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Thank you so much for your kind words ❤️
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What a great rhyme and it is beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
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Awww
So sweet of u
Thank you dear for ur kind words ☺️❤️
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Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️❤️
Sure will check out soon !!
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It’s really sweet. I love the way how it starts with we start the night as strangers, and then concludes with “we are strangers no more” sleeping like siblings, yea it even can be related to the arranged marriage system, how two different people learn to be compatible with each other. Just like strangers they get tied in the relation and slowly blossom into a sweet sibling like bond. Reminds me of that song “Soul sister” loved the poem!!!
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Im so glad that u got mi words ri8 Tisha !!
As a writer it’s good to get cmnts like dis from readers
I’m honored and I’m thankful for u for ur kind words !!
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I am glad that I could get the message behind.. Cause you are a wonderful poet and poetic language is not so easy as ppl think it to be. Thank you for your beautiful poetry!!!😊
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So sweet of u
Thank youuuuuuuu ❤️
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This is so sweet and beautiful 😊❤❤❤
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Thank you so very much krishna ❤️❤️
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Loved this sweet poem! 🌷
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Glad to hear that from you dear
Thank you 😊❤️
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I love it!
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Just a big thank youuuuuuuu ❤️ dear ☺️
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Oh god! I loved this one. You’re such a master at writing such beautiful poetries. May the force be always with you!
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I’m honored to receive this words from amazing person like you man !!
Heartily Thank you for ur words !! Means a lot to me !!
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Lovely ♥️
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Thank you so much ❤️❤️
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So sweet
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Thank you dear !!
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Wonderful words!
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Thank you Malcolm ❤️
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That’s sweet
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Just like you 😉
Thank youuuuuuuu
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😁 that true…
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Hihihihi 😌😁
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