
Although I knew you couldn’t stay for long…
You somehow became my favourite season
Coming and going
Leaving traces of your magic
Leaving my mind to pick up the curves of your smile…
For me to look back to when you were too far for me to hold
You were my favourite
The summer before the fall
Too bad you couldn’t stay, atlest not for long..
But I’ve to do this for me
I’ve to let you go,
As do the leaves do in fall.
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Heyy Nirant!!..Your words are just awesome..
Just check out my blog.
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Thank you, sure I’ll !
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Hello dearπββοΈ Everything is quite over there. U ok?
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Heyy hieee
Yess yess I’m all good just bit out of poetries , will come back soon !
And thank you for being kind and asking me , good to have u in mi zone dear β€οΈ
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I had a lil dry spell and snapped out of it a bit yesterday. Hope u r well. Missing u here my dear. Stay safe xx
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Oh dear I’m all good and surely making a comeback with mi poem today itself !!
And thanks for ur constant support , u can feel free to connect me on instagram !!
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A poetic comparison of love to season seems to make the ending a bliss feel of memories. Beautiful!π
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Oh dear, u got mi words ri8 on point ππ»
Thank you so much for your kind read β€οΈ
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Yes I am, hope you are doing well !! πΉ Have a great day !!
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Utoo dear !!β€οΈ
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Welcome back, Beautiful story of love !! πΉ
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Hey
Thank you mate
Good to see u here, hope u doing good
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Another thoughtfully written poem, Nirant. Really like how it started off very hopeful in love, like a summer love. And then it ends very nicely with the love fading away into the fall. Wonderful sequencing and great choice of words to evoke timelines. Hope you are doing well and stay safe.
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Heyy Mabel , how are u mate ? Yess I’m doing great dis quarantine , hope u r safe with ur beloved ones !!
And thank you so much for ur kind read as always, glad to see you back !!
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Good to hear you are doing well. It’s lovely seeing you inspired to write poetry in these times. Keep writing. I’m good over here and safe. See you soon again π
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Coool
Have a great day ahead
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Yo!! True π
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Marvelous π€©ππ₯
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Ahaa
Thank youuuuuuuu β€οΈπ
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Don’t be so happy, π
I have just appreciated your poetry.π
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Hahaha datsy I’m happy coz beautiful soul like u appreciated mi work dat too on early mrng of Sunday , so it’s cool though π
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Welcome! Thank you for following my blog!
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Glad to have u in my zone
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Lovely πΌ
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Thank you !
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Well penned!
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Thank you, Mia β€οΈ
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So beautifulπ
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Thank you dear π
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Oh this one has too many beautiful lines β€
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Coz Love matters in dis ππ»
Thank you for ur kind read
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ππpleasure is all mine
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Welcome back!π
Sweet words ππ
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Hey hiii, yes it’s good to be back !
Thank you dear ππ
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Beautiful lines and ecpressions.
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Means a lot from u mate
Thank you !!
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Welcome.
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That’s so beautiful Nirat. Bravo.
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Ouch… *Nirant
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Hahaha I didn’t recognised at 1st ,but now I did after your ouch lol
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Thank you dear !!
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My pleasure
xoxo
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“You were my favourite, the summer before the fall” “I’ve to let you go, As do the leaves do in fall”. The relation between these lines and to the experience does the trick for me. Lovely poem man!
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Coz love is like season only π
Thank you so very much Joel for ur kind support as always !!
Means a lot to me !!
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Beautiful words
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Thank you brother β€οΈ
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I loved this..
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Thank you dear…. π
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Lovely poem,expressed well.
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Thank youuuuuuuu so much, Ally
Hope u doing well dis pandemic !!
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There is a second wave of the pandemic in Victoria, seriously bad. There are also active cases in Sydney. Here in Queensland where I live it is slowly starting up again, we are very worried. I stay at home unless it’s essential to go out. I hope you are well and safe.
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Oh dats awwfully bad , take care of yourself,
Yess we are in bit of stable condition as of now !!
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Beautiful love Nirant !! ππ
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Glad you enjoyed it, Nima π
Thank you !!
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You are welcome Nirant π
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Nice to see you back at it and I’m doing poetry month this month!
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Good to see your constant support to mi words mate
Thank you !!
Wow..!! Dats great, looking forward to read asap !!
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