Hopeful hearts
in broken skies
fall in the dark
above her eyes.
And so she cries
With silent tears
Far from the stars
A million years.
And every wish
She makes in fear
that one day too,
She’ll disappear.
_Niranโ .
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There are times I’ve wished to simply vanish like a shooting star or fly away like a bird.
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Birds are always freee
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I love watching the stars at night because you can draw pictures with them just by counting the stars and it will make a picture in the sky and this is so beautiful Perfection
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Yeah it is ,coz shooting stars are not just a stars it’s everything for everyone
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That is so true
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Every wish she makes in fear
That one day too sheโll disappear..really touching lines nirant..๐โโ๏ธ
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Yeah yeah mate . I have wrote this poem keeping some major points in mind . & Glad dat u loved mi piece mate ๐๐๐ซ
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beautiful poetry
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Thank you ๐
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My pleasure
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Beautiful ๐
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Thank you for reaching & reading it buddy have a good day ๐๐
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You too bud! ๐
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Beautiful and lovable
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Thank you dear ๐,have a good day ๐
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Killing simplicity poemโบ๏ธ
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Thank you dear ๐
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Most welcome friend๐
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Simply beautiful๐
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Thank you dear ,have a good day ๐๐ค๐๐
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Lovely..๐
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Thank you mate ๐
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Welcome Nirant…
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You too have a wonderful day๐, and you are welcome ๐
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Wow. That really touched my heart. ๐
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Thank you very much , I was not 100% sure with dis ,cuz I posted it after a big gap & due to sum hectic schedule I was not focusing on mi words ,but glad to see such a good response from masses๐๐๐ ๐
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I’m so glad you posted it. ๐
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Yea smthng 2 cheer abt๐๐
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