I want to let people in
without fear of them
taking everything they find,
Good & leaving.
I want to lounge around
In my thoughts, my feelings
to laugh with me
when I need it,
to put an arm around me,
when when I don’t
As they go, I want to hear
see you later
flow from their lips
Instead of goodbye.
_Niran† .
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🎀Happy Blogging 🎀
Loved this one… feels a lot❤
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Thank youuuuuuuu for stopping by and appreciating mi work Breeta .
I loved your name too ☺️
Breeta unique name !! What’s the meaning of Breeta?
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Actually the word in Bengali was ‘Brito’, someone who’s welcome or respected or ordained, something like that. Ma added an extra ‘a’ and made it ‘Breeta’. But I should have never looked up my name-meaning in Google…it went hilarious 😂
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😂😂😂😂 hilarious innovative gal .
Khoob bhaloo 😉
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😄😄😄
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you for your sweet word mate ✔️💯👏
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This is relatable. 😐 Very painful, indeed. I hope you never have to hear a goodbye again.
So, it’s a *See you later* from my side, haha. 😛
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Dats wat I want to hear from u ✌️🤷 Firefly🐝
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Yayyy! 😺
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🐝🐝
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so sweet…
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Aww ,thank you so much Geet🎀😉
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most welcome…
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Well it’s a month dat we know each other Geet ,well u look married woman ,so if u have time ,& if interested u can join my WhatsApp group . I’m just saying not forcing 😉
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Well looks can be deceptive…I’m single…not married..
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Oooppssss 😅 but my invitation is on wai8!!!!
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Beautiful post
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Thank you dawg 🎀😉
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I never say good bye to closed ones….and to u too😜😛
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That’s wat I want to hear from u all fellas 💜👏, hope u loved mi small piece ☺️
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😝😍
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Hey Nirant! 🙂
I have nominated you for:
https://dexterouswriterblog.wordpress.com/2018/07/20/nominated-for-the-bloggers-recognition-award
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Sure I’ll look into it as soon as possible ✌️😉🎀
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“As they go, I want to hear
see you later
flow from their lips
Instead of goodbye.”
This is amazing! 🌹♥️
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Thank you Shreya 💜 glad dat u loved my small piece thank you 🎀😉
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Anybody would love to hear see you later instead of goodbye because there is hope,affection in see you later whereas goodbye kills all hopes..lovely poem😊☺️
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Actually ☺️, so never say goodbye 😉
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See you later 😊
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Yupieeeeeee 😎
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I never liked Goodbyes, and you expressed it so beautifully.. 👍😊
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Thank you thank you Himanshi 😉🎀🎀
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No one can say gud bye to you…brilliant poem👍🏻👍🏻
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Thank you mate 👏👏🎀🎀
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You always welcome dear🤗
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🎀
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👍😃
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🎀🎀
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Well I’ll never say goodbye again. Lovely poem 😊
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🎶🎵Thank you *Thought for Change* 🎀
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You’re welcome Nirant Gurav 🤗
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Full name 😂😂😂
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I even know your middle name.
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Wat ???? Wer did u got ??? R u a spy??????😦
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Lol
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Okay msg me personally
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NRG 😹
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Stalker 😂arii
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Lol
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