You
&
I,
We felt too much,
we felt more,
more that what we
could grasp,more
than what we could
utter with eyes
that can never fully
see,
more than what our
mouths could ever speak of.
You & I,
we felt too much
& feel too deep
but in the end,
it still wasn’t enough.
_Niranβ .
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.
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Brilliant.
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Glad to hear that mi frnd qββΏβq
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Loads of excellent writing here. I wish I saw it found the site sooner. Congrats!
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Aww
That means a lot to me
Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating mi work βΊοΈβ€οΈ
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A fantastic write up there. Good stuff. One of the best yet!
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Thank you so very much Eddie β€οΈ for stopping by and appreciating mi work βΊοΈ
Means a lot to me !!
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Love is never enough how long is a day and how short π
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Yesssss Nisha π€
Love is unconditional and never enough for lifelong
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Yes true buddy
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Loveable…π
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Yesss !!
Just you & I πΉ
Thank you so much Dear for ur lovely showering
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Lol thats true
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Yeah it’s damn trueeeee !!
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Yerp lol π
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I love this poem. So much and I have a question how do you get rid of dry throut i mean i am drinking water but it’s still dry
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Sometimes loves leaves out some dry throat ,as words won’t get swallowed easily π
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Itβs never enough when it comes to love xx
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Exactly dear π
Thank you for stopping by and appreciating mi work
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Ouch
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Ahaaa !!!
Is that so bad or it made ur day ???? Mate
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Wow !!! Nice Poem
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Thank you so much mate πβοΈ
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Amazing bro π
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Thank you so much bruh βοΈ
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Poignant beautiful play of words
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A poignant beautiful play of words
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Thank you sir for ur words π
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My pleasure
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This was something deep from heart. β€
Worth all the love and appreciation buddy. Keep it up! ππ
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My pleasure… B…i B…a πππ
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Aww! Such a sweet sweet poem. It was really beautiful.
“You & I,
we felt too much & feel too deep but in the end,it still wasnβt enough”.
– my favourite part of the poem.
It’s never enoughhhhhhhhhhh…….
It had a good flow, and the vocab usage was really good. The emotion is portrayed brilliantly. An excellent job!
Keep it up!
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Awwwwwwwwwwwww dear , thank you so much for your sweet lines ππ€ means a lot to me for mi future writings
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It’s my pleasure brother
Liked this post very much .
Keep sharing π
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Sure mi gal , have a blessed day ahead π π
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Never ending!
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Yeah mate
Never ending for lifetime π
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Thank you so much for your kind words mate
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Completely my pleasure!
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It’s never enough. Lovely write up.
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Yeah adiiiiii it’s never enough π€π
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It will never be enoughπ
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Yeaa mi frnd ,it will never be enough for the whole life π
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