Let’s jump into the ocean
Together
And dive down into
Something deeper,
Something deeper than our
Lungs can bear.
And if we never see the surface
Again,
At least we can say
We felt something
So deep
That it took our breath
Away.
_Niran†.
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Thank you so much for your kind words ❤️
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Beautiful poem💝💝
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Last 4 lines… 🦋
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❤️🌻❤️🌻
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Hmm is anyone else having problems with the pictures on this blog loading?
I’m trying to determine if its a problem on my end or
if it’s the blog. Any responses would be greatly appreciated.
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It’s problem from ur side mate !!
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Aww dear
Ur precious words means a lot to me for mi future writings 🎀
And I’ll be glad to see ur presence in mi new posts too mate
Thank you so much dear❤️
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I nominated you for Mystery Blogger, go to my site for rules and questions!
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Thank you so much for Nominating me for this award !!
Surely I’ll look into it ,as other Nominations are pending too !!
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You are deservant of it. You are welcome.
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ʘ‿ʘ
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Beautiful ♥️
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Thank youuuuuu so much 🌹
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So beautiful!❤️
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Thank you Richa ❤️
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Have you jumped?.
Awesome..i jumped but someone pulled me out..
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Yess i did !!
And I’m still deeper 😉💕
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Beautiful, Last lines are amazing 👌
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Yess coz our love is deeper 😉💕
Thank you so much for your kind words
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Yeah, i can sense that😊 My pleasure.
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🤝❤️
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You leave us some beautiful verses to remain romantic.
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Yess coz they are meant to be 😉
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I mean, what you say is valuable and all. Nevertheless think of if you
added some great photos or videos to give your posts more, “pop”!
Your content is excellent but with pics and clips,
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Superb blog!
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Nice poem
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Thank you so much dear !!
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Good one Nirant…
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Thank you so much Anamika ❤️
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Nirant, just a thought. Can the last line here also mean dying in love?
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Yesssss dear coz love is deeper here and it’s so deep that it took our breathe away for lifetime !!
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stunningly beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much mate 🙌🖤
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Beautiful
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Glad u loved it !!
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Beautifully written….so intense👌
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Yeah coz love is deeper 😉
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The last line said it all 🙂 Beautiful 🙂
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Yayyyyyyyyy how deep my love is 😉❣️
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Ha ha 😂 that the person for whom this is written can only tell 😉
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Heheeh yeaaaa she got this perfectly🙈
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😜then you have accomplished the Everest 😉
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Hehehehehehehehehe 🤫😌😌
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Damn this one😍👌
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Yayyyyyyyyy coz love is deeper ❣️
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Yeah💕
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Stunning! Breath-taking ✨💛
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Yess coz love is deep 💖😉
Do checkout my recent post I posted today dear ☺️
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Sure will! 💛
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Thank you 😻
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Just checking through my notification 😊✨
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Yess u have got it , my recent post is moments and u have checked already !! ☺️☺️
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Yup it’s beautiful! 😊
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☺️☺️🙌💖
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Bravo ✌️ Brilliant..keep blogging! Cheers!!!
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Thank you so much sir 🖤
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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You’re most welcome my friend ☺️
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It’s Toooo Good:)
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Coz love is deep 😉 💖
Thank you so much dear for ur kind read
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beautiful & deep!!
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Thank you so much Kranti .
Yea it’s deep coz love is unconditional ❣️
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My absolute pleasure ❤️
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Reblogging to my sister site Timeless Wisdoms
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So sweet of you 🙌☺️
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😌
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https://wp.me/paBgxs-o2
किस बात की सजा है मुझे ??
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https://wp.me/paBgxs-nZ
*कुंभ मेला अखाडो की सूची*
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Woah! Ur such a versatile writer. The ending is so awesome. Love surely is deep ❤
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Thank you so much dear !!
Thank you so much for your support through out my blog !! 🙌🙌
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Ha ha ha really enjoyed this especially the punch in the end. Great and nice.
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Glad to hear that u enjoyed mi work ☺️
Keep supporting
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Sure mate 👍
Glad to have u in my zone
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Also read my blog THE LAST LETTER
AT https://wp.me/p9oXle-1s
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Wow! This is so beautifully penned. 😊
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Aww
Thank you so much Winnie ☺️
Thank you so much for your kind words
Means a lot to me dear ☺️
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My pleasure always, Nirant! 😊
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✨☺️
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This is it right here, amazing work 🙌🏽
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Thank you so much dawg 🙂
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️🖤
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❤
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💞
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💯 marvelous 🙌
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😍 Thank you so much mate for ur kind words ☺️❤️
Means a lot to me
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Pleasure bro👏
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☺️☺️
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Beautifully written, evoking all the senses (diving into the ocean, deep breath…). I like the symbol of the ocean as water stands for emotions and feelings according to psychology. Your lovely poem just made me think of love and passion between people whose ages are different. What about wanting all this your poem so wonderfully expresses but getting attracted to someone who is much younger or older than ourselves? How does age affect love and passion and how does poverty because of the Capitalist system affect them too? I recommend you these two lovely posts by my friend Mario Savioni. I think they connect very well with your poem here where there is always a gap between our dreams and desires, and our hard realities.
Love and passion with age difference: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/01/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-4/
Love and passion affected by poverty and the Capitalist system when your basic needs like food and roof are still not met: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/02/three-meals-a-day-and-housing/
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Awww dear ur questions are worth answering & yess it’s quite relatable coz feelings are mutual mate ☺️
Thank you so much for your sweet words 😊
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You are very kindly welcome, Nirant. You will see the two links I have sent are two short texts (it just takes a few minutes to read both). You will see the connection with your lovely piece. Mario and you are great writers (I am so jealous of you both). It is just that he deserves more likes and/or comments than my humble writing.
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Aww sure I’m going through that words soon , as net is slow datsy but I’ll look it very soon ☺️☺️
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Thank you! Means a lot to me.
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☺️☺️
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I like the pictures and the poem!
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Glad to hear that mate 😊
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️🖤
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🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much dear for ur sweet words 😊
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It was my pleasure, Nirant. You write well. 😊
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Glad to hear that 😊 .
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Romantic…😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😉😉😉😉😉😉😍☺️☺️☺️
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Awww Yess it is , coz my love is deep 😉
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😁😁😁😁😁😁😁Yeah, very deep…🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😉😉😉😉😉😉😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😊😊😊😊😊😊ha😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇🤓🤠 🤠😬🤪 🤪hahahahahaha
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☺️☺️
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Amazing work!
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Thank you so much Aqsaa for ur kind words ☺️
Means a lot to me !!
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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☺️☺️
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It took my breath away!! Marvellous! Truly marvellous.
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Aww
Thank you so much dear for your kind words ☺️❤️
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Beautiful lines!
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Thank you so much mate for ur kind read ☺️
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My pleasure!🙂
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This is really awesome nirant👌👍… it really touched deep
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Aww glad that my words touched ur heart deeply ☺️
Thank you so much dear for ur kind words ☺️
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Such lovely words.
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Thank you so much mate for ur sweet words 😊
Means a lot to me !!
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I love this so much and i just love reading you’re poems their so amazing and I told you i would read and comment a long comment on here about how amazing you and you’re poems are they are like beyond the galaxy that is so beautiful i love this Bae and i would swim the whole ocean for someone 🙂 I love reading your poems and talking to you….You’re so sweet and nice wonderful person ever
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Aww dear I’m really glad to meet u here on this platform and thank you so much for ur constant support to my writing ❤️
Means a lot to me ☺️
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You’re welcome Bae always here for you and giving you support
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Wow.. these lines surely took my breath away… Amazing …
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Aww, Thank youuuuuuuu so much dear for ur kind read ☺️
Means a lot to me !!
Glad to have you in my zone 🎀
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You are welcome and happy to be in your zone… 😊
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☺️
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Superb! you have nailed it!
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Thank you so much sir for your kind words ☺️
Glad you liked it !!
Means a lot to me !!
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Well done Nirant.
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Thank you so much mate for ur kind words ☺️
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Wow..breathlesa
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Ahaaaa !!
Coz love is deeper 😉☺️
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That’s right
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☺️☺️
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Absolutely beautiful ❤
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Thank you so much dear for ur kind read ☺️
Means a lot to me
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Every single word Breathes Passionate love…❤😍😊
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Yesss it is coz my love is deep 😉
Thank you so much Perky for ur kind words ☺️
Means a lot to me .
Take care dear stay happy and strong ☺️
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Yeah! I will buddy…Thanks for Caring and sharing your deep thoughts😊
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☺️☺️
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Such a beautiful love drenched poem
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Thank you so much, Shantanu ☺️
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My absolute pleasure
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🙂 ❤
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💝☺️
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Lovely 🙂
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Thank you so much dear ☺️☺️
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You are Welcome
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💓 🌊
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💝🌅
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Deep and beautiful without an end 😊
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Yess Krishna☺️ coz love is unconditional ❣️
Thank you so much for your time & words 🙌
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This is beautiful Nirant! 😊
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Thank you so much Christy for ur beautiful word 🙌💝
Glad u loved it !!
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🤗
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Fabulous poem. Had me breathless at the end…
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Awwww 💖
Glad to hear that from beautiful soul ☺️
Thank you so much mate for ur kind words !!
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👌❤
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🙌💖
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Ahhh one of your best ….. . Love love love it
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Thank you Thank you Thank you so much Sakshi ☺️
Means a lot to me !!
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Always a pleasure 😊
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Beautiful poem 🐚💙
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Thank you so much Justice for ur words and constant support to my writing ☺️ 🖤
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Of course, Nirant. 🙂
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A strangely wonderful thought!
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Aww . Thank you so much Gentlemen 🎀 for ur kind words ☺️
Means a lot to me for my future writings !!
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unconditional love…Well portrayed Nirant..
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Yess brother 💯 ,the love is unconditional coz it’s deeper 😉
Thank you so much for your kind read ☺️
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Fluid and emotionally charged just as the context is!!
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Hey hi Saahil !!
Yess it is emotionally charged coz my love is deep 😉💖
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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Lovely post Nirant 😊
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Thank you so much Pam ☺️!!
Hope u having good time in my zone ❤️
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You’re welcome Nirant 😊
A bit confused when you said your zone?
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My zone means ,in my poem zone ☺️
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Beautiful Nirant ❤️
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Thank you so much Sanika ☺️
Glad u liked it 💙😉
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😊👍
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Deep poem with deepest message.👏👌👍
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Yess it is deep poem coz the words are deeper like my love 😉💖
Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating mi work ☺️
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The ending 💓
Unconditional love potrayed so amazingly Nirant, you’re awesome!
🌸❤
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Ahaaaa !! The ending is what I always focus on and hope dis time it worked amazinly !!
Hehehe I’m awesome, and ur Amazing 🙌💙
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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Most welcome!
Yes, it worked wonders this time 🙌
Thanks for saying that Nirant.
💃🙂
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☺️☺️
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Wow
A suicidal boyfriend lures his girlfriend for death/danger/another world with his magical words. 😀
Wish I had even 10% of such skills to make a girl fall for me.
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Haha !!
Just a beginner Bhai , learning from u all and sometimes it’s fluke 😉
Thank you so much for your sweet words 😊
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This left me speeeechless! Didn’t know it could end like that, the ending really toook my heart away. 😻 Your words are magic. 💙
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Awwww that’s so sweet to hear partner 🧡💙
Yess my words are magical coz my love is deep 😉
Thank you so much for your kind words 😉 ✌️
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Yayyyy! Likhte rahiye, Partner. 💙
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Sure jii !! ☺️
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Wow! This is good.
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Yess it is coz love is deep 😉💖
Thank you so much Muntazir 🖤 for ur kind read ☺️
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My pleasure
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Ah the purity of unconditional love.. good one mate ❤
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Yess dear the love is unconditional ❣️
Thank you so much for your kind words mate 😊
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Bravo Nirant 👏👏👏👏💕
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Thank you so much dear 💖
Thank you so much for your constant support and showering love to my writing !!
Have a great day ahead !!
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You are doing great my friend☺😊 It takes time to get a feeling for what you write. Dont worry about us…write for urself☺😊 what you feel💕
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Aww dear , so sweet you are !!
I’m glad to have such a beautiful soul in my zone ❤️
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Awww ….we r both old souls my friend☺
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☺️🙆♂️
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Magical✨
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Yess it is coz love is deep 😉💖
Thank you so much Kajal for ur sweet and magical words ☺️
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Heartfelt ❤️
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💖 Thank youuuuuuuu so much dear for ur sweet word 💖
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It will make our deep away……
Beautiful poem…….👌👌👌
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Woahhhhhhhh 💖
Glad u liked it Pravya !!
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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‘Feeling something deep’…..
Excellent!!
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Yess it’s deep 😉
Thank you so much ma’am for ur kind words and constant support to my writings !!
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Beautiful. Surely a marvellous poem. 🙂
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Aww … Thank you so much Ramayani for ur kind words , means a lot to me !!
Just wrote it from heart and maybe it worked !! ☺️
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Yes it did because it is a heartfelt one for sure. Loved it. 😊
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☺️☺️💖
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Woah… the last 4 lines took my breath away
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Ahahaaa !!
Coz the love is deep and getting deeper 😉
Thank you so much mate for ur sweet words and kind read !!
Have a great day ahead !!
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