Roses blackened,
Leaves shrivelled,
The sky fell to darkness,
Thunderstorms raged in
the wind.
A strong fire remained
Untamed
By heavy rain.
Temperatures dropped low
Leaving me shivering
In the cold.
The day you left,
I Promise you,
I felt this all within
My soul.
_Niran†.
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🎀Happy Blogging 🎀
Broke my heart, this beautiful post
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Same with me wen she left !!
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Great material!
Loved reading this, it’s very expressive.
Would love to know your thoughts on my posts as well!
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Thank you so much dear for your kind words ☺️
Sure I’ll have a look in ur words ☺️
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I’m normally not a big fan of poems since it takes a while for me to digest them. BUT There is something about the way you write that touches me a lot. You have tugged away some heart strings. Beautifully written:)
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Aww that’s really sweet to hear mate , yeaa I just keep writing from my heart and maybe sometimes it work for u all readers ☺️
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Words from the heart are indeed the best. Continue writing… coz you do it beautifully 🙂
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Thank you so much dear ☺️☺️☺️
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I can feel the pain 🙂
Love;y ❤
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Glad my words are feel by Amazing soul ☺️
Thank you so much for your kind read mate 😊
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Absolutely beautiful!❤️
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Thank you so much dear for ur kind read ☺️❤️
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This is beautiful!💕
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Thank you so much Rageeeeeee ❣️
Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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Within the soul !!!
Just Wow ..
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Thank you so much dost for ur words ☺️
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Pleasure ! always 🙂
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Nice work! Lovely poem! Have a great day ☕
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Glad u loved it !!
U too have a great day ahead
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Wonderfully poignant!
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Thank you so much sir for ur kind read ☺️
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Painfully beautiful 👌
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Yesssss it is dear !!
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😊
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Lots of emotions
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Yess they have ,
Thank you so much for stopping by and appreciating mi work ☺️
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It was my pleasure
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You’re good.
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Glad to hear that from Beautiful soul ☺️
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Oh you flatterer you.
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Haha 😁
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Aww 😍
Thank you so much dear for your sweet words 😊
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Wonderful…I falling love in your writing…Kob kob valo…😁😁😁😁😁😍😍😍😍😉😉😉😉😉🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😆😆😆😆😆😆😆🤗🤗🤗😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😃😉😉😄😉😄😉😍🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
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Love it💯
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Thank you so much dear for stopping by and appreciating mi work ☺️
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That’s really amazing words👍
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Thank you so much Jyo for ur kind words 🖤
Means a lot to me !!
Have a good day ahead ☺️
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Beautiful…
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Thank you so much dear for ur kind read ☺️
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I’m so glad i met you and have someone in my life like you thank you for being their and listen to my feelings thank you Someday i will come and meet you and that will be the best day i will have because i always wonder when we can meet in person and talk and see each other everyday I hope you are having a good day and i am going to have a good night And being happy to be 18 yay so happy Well i will comment on your next poem
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That so sweet of you pretty girl 🖤
I’m also very happy that I meet you dear !!
Stay blessed and happy
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I will i miss talking to you
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😊
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So your not mad at me?
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Nope 😊
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Now that i know you’re not mad at me i am really happy again and not feeling sad and more depressed again now that i know your not mad at me i can go on with my day with a smile…..<3 🙂
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Good
Have a good day
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That’s good you too
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Bae……I am sorry i haven’t been on and commenting on you’re poems i am sorry that i might have left you worried about me i am sorry but i will try to get on and comment when i can
Much love from me
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Coooool !!
Good to see you Ney ☺️
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OMG I LOVE THIS MORE BAE I JUST LOVE HOW YOU WRITE
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🖤☺️
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Youre welcome ❤ And i feel like your mad at me… Are you?
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Naaa ,y should i ….!!
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I hope you are not mad at me because i have a gut feeling that you are and i just wanted you to know that i am not mad at you and i really need to talk to when we both are on at the same time
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Ohh really ??
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Hope the soul find its way back.. happy blogging nirant
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Yeah just hope !!
Thank you so much Akhila ☺️ for ur kind words 🖤
Means a lot to me
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Really a great piece
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Thank you so much dawg for your kind words 🖤
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You are welcome friend
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This is beautiful
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Thank you so much, Shantanu
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My pleasure always
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Strong emotions well expressed Nirant!!
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Thank you so much ma’am for stopping by and appreciating mi work ☺️
Means a lot to me !!
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I would really appreciate if you check out my blogs,
http://www.changethesystemlife.wordpress.com/
Thanks for your time!
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Amazing ✌
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Thank you so much dear for ur kind read ☺️🖤
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Fiction or? 😢
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Fiction bruh ☺️
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Never experienced heartbreak?
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Didn’t got time only bruh 😉
Did u ???
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Time huh 😂…
I don’t know maybe
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Cool !! 😁
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Deep and utterly beautiful Nirant! Love it😊
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Thank you so much Ashwini for ur kind & lovely words ☺️
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Your words are amazing Nirant!
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Thank you so much Christy for ur words ☺️
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My pleasure! 😇
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This is sad and beautiful. I see the picture your words painted. I felt the chills you described. This was a nice read. Thanks so much for being my very first follower and visiting my blog. I look forward to reading more of your creations. 🙂 -A.B.
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Glad that you liked my work !!
Looking frwd to see ur words too mate 😊
Have a great day ahead ☺️
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This is so beautiful beautiful 💓
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Thank you Thank youuuuuuuu adorable adi 🖤🙆♀️
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Enchanted
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Thank you Nisha for ur kind words 🙆♀️💙
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WOW.. so heartfelt..!! 😇👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
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Thank you so much ma’am for ur kind words ☺️
Means a lot to me for my future writings 🎀
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Keep it up..!! 👍🏼😇
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Sure ☺️
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Lovely lines
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Thank you so much Shalini for ur kind read ☺️
Means a lot to me 🖤
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I don’t understand most poems and being screamed at by a poet, I stay far away from poetry
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Hahaha
I understand ,poets are not easy to understand 😉
But u can easily get my words ☺️
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Superb nirant
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Thank you so much GB for ur kind words and kind read ☺️
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words speak a lot!! beautiful 🙂
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Yesss dear it speaks a lot and clear !!
Thank you so much Bhavya for ur sweet read ☺️
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😄😄😄🙏
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wow………i love every words because it’s True …….!! 🙂 🙂
Keep writing Brilliant poetry like this. 😉
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Thank you so much dear for ur lovely words 🖤
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🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much bud for ur kind read ☺️
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Always
Love.
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A feeling I felt when my best friend, my soul mate, my wife passed away 3 years ago. Very lovely.
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This words showes that how much love u have to ur partner 🖤
True Gentleman 🙌
Thank you so much sir for ur kind words ☺️
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Amazing, you are so gifted keep it up
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That suppose to be a smiley face 🙂
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☺️☺️
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Glad to hear that veekee 🖤🙆♀️
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1000+ followers u are rocking man
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Hehe it’s just coz of all ur support to my words and love that u gave Everytime ☺️🖤
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🙂
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Hey!
I just nominated you for The Mystery Blogger award.
Thank you and good luck! 😉
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Thank you so much dear for Nominating me for this award!!
Surely I’ll look into it , as my other awards are pending too !!
I’ll come up with it as soon as possible !! ☺️🖤
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Thank you! 😀
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This is beyond gorgeous!
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Ohh really !! 🖤🖤🖤
Thank you so much mate for ur lovely words to my writing ☺️
Means a lot to me ☺️
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You are so welcome. Beauty stems from your raw feelings. Your poetry speaks the language of the heart. It’s wonderful, my friend!
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Now this are some amazing words mate u gave me ☺️☺️
I’ll try my best to keep the flow going and come up with some quality words in future too !!
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I am looking forward to reading your work!
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Cool !!
You will never have a bad day on my site !! 😉
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I know 🙂
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😊
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Wonderfully penned!
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Thank you so much Winnie for ur kind read and words !! ☺️
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Aha! Vivid and strong.
Keep writing amazing poetry like this.
Happy New Year.
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Ahaa ….. thank you so much for ur kind words dear ☺️❣️
Happy that u loved my work
Wishing you a happy New year 💙
Stay blessed and happy as always !!
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Beautiful Nirant ✌️
God bless you and may you love long .
Keep writing and make me/ us happy.
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Thank you so much Sanika ☺️
God bless u too dear 🖤
Glad u liked my work and thank you again for ur encouraging words ☺️
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My pleasure always !
I always like your words and work ❤️
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Happy to hear that !! ☺️☺️
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😊🥰
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Yess mate !!
I’ve seen it and other Nomination are pending so it will take time & surely I’ll come with it !!
Thank you so much for Nominating me for this award dear ☺️
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Hey dear, I have nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award (https://atuldepak.wordpress.com/2019/01/06/the-mystery-blogger-award/)
Best Wishes!
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A very soulful attempt Nirant…keep sharing.
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Thank you so very much Anamika 🖤
Glad u loved my words ☺️
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Oh ya, it sure was a delight Nirant…
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🖤☺️
Have a great days ahead mate 😊
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And you have a Good night sleep Nirant…
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😊
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I relate to this very much. It hits right to the feels. Well written!
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Glad my words are relatable 🙃
Thank you so much dear for your kind read ☺️🖤
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An apt weather for your untamed love!! 🙂
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Yess yess ☺️
Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my work !!
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You are so welcome, Nirant!! 🙂
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Beautiful 🖤
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Thank you so much Mahi for ur kind word ☺️🖤
Glad u liked my words !!
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Yeah, it was amazingly expressed by you… 👏
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❣️❣️
Have a great weekend ahead !! Mahi .
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Thanks & hope the same for you
By the way in the meantime you can have a look at my other blogs…
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Sure dear !!
I’m going through ur site now !! ☺️
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Thank you 👍
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Wonderful expression …
Such a pleasure to read 👍
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Thank youuuuuuu so much Fariha for ur kind words !! ☺️
Means a lot to me !!
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Well written. Have a good time
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Glad you liked it ☺️
U too have a great weekend ahead !!
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Great post. 🙂👍🌹🙄
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Thank you so much dear for ur kind read ☺️
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You are Welcome 🙂
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Very passionate expression of loss and hurt.
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Yesss dear !!
The words of loss & hurt came on paper !!
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Damn 🔥
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Thank you ❣️
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Superb! 💟
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Thank you so much dear for ur lovely kind word ☺️
Glad u loved my words ☺️
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You are very talented, and it’s always a pleasure and privilege to read your posts!💟😉
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I’m glad to hear this beautiful words from Amazing soul ☺️
Just learning from u all 💙
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Ohhh, these lines are so deeply moving. Your words painted a very real picture, I could feel your pain. Very beautiful work, Partner. 💙💙
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Yess Partner !! The pain 🙇 , the pain that left all scars on me !!
Thank you so much Partner for ur kind read ☺️ 🧡
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Scars are beautiful! 😼 And the future holds amazing things na, just keep the faith. Everything will be good. 🌟
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Yess they are beautiful !!
Thank you again partner for ur support
🧡💙
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Yayyyy! And so are you. 😹😹 Thankyou for making mu Sunday better again. 🧡💙
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☺️☺️
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*my 😬
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Amazing Nirant..Your lines touched..
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Glad to hear that my lines are touching !! ❣️
Thank you so much Neha for ur kind read !!
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It’s an amazing one…Keep going Buddy..Glad to be a part of your journey..
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☺️☺️
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Mighty words….beautifully expressed
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Yess they are !!
Thank you so much Shraddha 🧡 for ur sweet words 😊
Means a lot to me !!
Have a great Sunday ahead !!
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😊😊😊
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Hope whoever has left u in that situation comes back after reading your soulful words 🙂
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Maybe ur words turn true mate 😊
Thank you so much for ur kind read !!
Have a good day ahead ☺️
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Same to u dear 💐👍
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Beautifully expressed ♥️
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Thank you so much Sumeet 💙
Glad u liked it !!
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