She loved hard…
And that was the issue .
…
Instead of appreciating her,
He took her love and crumbled it into a paper ball.
And threw it off into the air ,
With no direct place to land …
…
She lost herself .
She no longer knew how to love
Love was a foreign bacteria in her mouth.
It was a disease…
The day he left, she could no longer breathe …!!
_Niran†.
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Sure
nirantgurav@nirant138
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Dis is the ri8 one !!
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Hi Nirant can you review my book? https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07V4NLJ5B/?ref_=aga_h_su_B07V4NLJ5B_title
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Ohhh wow
I would love to do it
Sure I’ll give a read mate !!
Very best for ur success dear !!
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So it was just amazing Man! It shows every shades of words when we play with them. 🌾🌾
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Yess actually the bitter truth of modern love story !!
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I totally loved the idea of love with bacteria so different and unique.
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Yesss coz lots if ppl get affected by dis disease datsy 😉
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Hahahaha true man
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Yesss
And thank you for appreciating mi work ☺️
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My pleasure
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☺️☺️
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😿😿😿
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Yeah I can understand ,hope ur not contaminated with this disease????
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I’m suffering from this 😿 And it’s fatal
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Oooops
Take care bud ❤️
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Sure 😇❤
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So sensational.
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Yesss it is dear ☺️
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You’ve expressed so beautifully
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Thank you so much dear (•‿•)
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😊
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Well written, so poignant!
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Yess coz it’s a disease 💔
Thank you dear !!
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My pleasure.
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🌹
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So short yet so deep Nirant.. I should say awesome poetry..
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Yessss bud , bacteria of love 💕
Thank you so much
Ur words means a lot to me !!
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😊😊
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Beautiful poems
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Thank you dear
Well Dr , any medicine on this disease?😁
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I wish there was one!!
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Uffff we all have to survive on our own !!
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True that!!
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😊
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Truly nice ! Whole poem is awesome ! Pyaar ka keeda … urff bacteria 👍👍🙃😃
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Hanjii pyaar ka keeda bahoot problem create karta hai in our heart and in our soul !!
Thank you so much dear for ur kind and sweet words 🌹
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Apparently your audience is very nourished. I had to clear the way to get here. Undoubtedly, your poem is a piece of good poetry. Unrequited love sometimes leaves incurable traces in the heart.
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Ur words means a lot to me !!
Thank you so very much Gentlemen 🎀❤️
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Your work is intense! Your words directly give a feel of expressions… which is very rare! I loved it!
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I’m really happy to hear that his from Beautiful soul like u ❤️
Thank you so much dear for your kind read ☺️
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Great post love you’re work.
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Thank youuuuuu so much dear ♥️
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It’s beautiful… And it’s tragic… Love is a disease itself
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yess got it ri8
Yess it’s disease & we all are contaminated with that in one or the other day
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Yeah we are…
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Yepp
Thank you for stopping by and appreciating mi work ☺️
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Wonderful writing..
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Thank you mate
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Ouch…. Its beautiful Niru as always
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Aww
Thank you so much penuuu
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Marvellous use of Bacteria👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Yess mi dear frnd ❤️
Thank you so much for ur kind words ☺️
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Wow this was just amazing
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Yesss it’s love bacteria 😉
Glad u liked it !!
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I love did . a lovely concept
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Thank youuuuuu again !!
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Heartbreaking.
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Yesss it is dear
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great job.
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Thank you so much bud 🌹
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My pleasure.
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🤗
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Lovely
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Thank you so much
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Your writing is always amazing! Thank you for sharing! 😊🤗
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Aww !!
Dat means a lot to me dear ♥️
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I’m feeling it, man! ❤️
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Yess after all feelings are mutual !! 🌹
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Poignant and deep! Brilliantly written!👏👏
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Thank youuuuuu so muchhhhh my dear friend ♥️
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Wow… Powerful one!
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Yesssssss !!
Glad u like my work Maasi 🌹
Thank you !! (•‿•)
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*maansi🙂
I love you work dude!💛
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Oops my bad 😅
“Maansi” 🌹
I’m really happy to hear that from Beautiful soul like you !!
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🤗
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☺️🤗
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Becteria of love. Well well well. This is something to think about.😊
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Yess yess yesss
As per me love is a disease 💔
Thank you for stopping by and appreciating mi work
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And as per me
Love is a felling that just goes beyond these four letters. It is a feeling that is inherent in every thing that breathes. It is the essense of life. It is the blood that runs through our veins to keep us alive. The oxygen that is being utilised to keep our organs working. A nector that gives us immorality in someone’s heart. I can go on and on but just to let you know, you might be right and the patients must be treated with shock therapy.
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Oh dear
Dats just mind blowing definition of love ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Loved it !!
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Or that might just be the becteria. Who knows?
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Might be , as on how the love goes !!
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Sad and painful! 💔
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Yess Kranti ❤️
Thank you for stopping by 😊
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My absolute pleasure! ❤️
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☺️☺️
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Very eloquently executed !!
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Thank youuuuuu so much Jyo 🌹
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Love is bacteria kab se
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Wohh tohhh abb love pe depend hai !!
How we treat love
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Yeh toh h
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Hanjii 🤗
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Hmm
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My dear friend, keep writing I have no way to read anymore of your older poems. All do e but I should read slower and enjoy better the WORDS
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Sure u have all the time in this world
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But your post comments are multiplying so fast like bacteria and moving my little screen up making me post accidentally in the wrong place! Hahaha
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Hahahaha
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*sux
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Wow I meant this to go up where I put the wrong word, “six” Oops.
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Lol
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“She loved hard…
And that was the issue .
…
Instead of appreciating her,
He took her love and crumbled it into a paper ball.”
My ex, is that you?
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Lol likewise 😂
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XD
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That was a really deep poem Nirant. Loved it! 👍
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Yess it is !!
Thank you so much Sonali 🌹
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Wonderful!
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Thank youuuuuu Tanusri ma’am 🌹
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I’m loving this, great work 🙌🏽
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Really happy to hear that from u dawg 👍
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Oh, Nirant!
This is a masterpiece 🙌🔥
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Ohh , Kajal !
Thank youuuuuu so very much 🌹
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Thank you for writing this one🙌
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Glad to see that u have enjoyed mi words ☺️
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Well done, strong words!
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Thank you mate
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✌
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🤝
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💔
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🙇
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❤️
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🙂
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oh man, this is so painful – beautifully painted
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Glad u enjoyed reading it !!
Thank you so much, Shantanu !!
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My absolute pleasure
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☺️☺️
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If there is a love bacteria out there, trust me, everyone is infected and everyone is glad they are.
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Yess it’s out from so long and everyone is contaminated with this disease and well some are and some not coz if bad experience or anything !!
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Yes, you are right. Something like Unrequited love leaves us full of longing.
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Yesss right my frnd !!
Glad u enjoyed mi poem !! 🙃
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Its sad and painful but the last lines “Love was a foreign bacteria in her mouth.
It was a disease…
The day he left, she could no longer breathe” says the amount of love it holds. Awesome 🙂
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Yesss coz she is done now and all she have is disease for lifetime or maybe for short period but it will haunt her !!
Thank you ame ❤️
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I get that feeling 😑 keep writing 😊gn 😊
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♂️☺️
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Such an emotional piece Nirant….
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Yess it is ma’am
Thank you for stopping by and reading it !!
Means a lot to me !!
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Its wonderful !!
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Thank youuuuuu Khushi 🌹
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Pain oozes out of this one, wonderfully done.
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U got ur words ri8 moushmi
Thank you so much !!
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This is painful yet beautifully penned Niru … !
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Glad u feel that pain in this words !!
Thank you so much Nath for ur kind read ☺️
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My pleasure 😊
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☺️
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your final stanza holds so much truth and exquisitely written. really wonderful, sad but true
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Yess coz she was done and have nothing left than disease as her life partner 💔
Thank you so very much Gina for ur kind words ☺️
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disease and sickness eat from the inside out, i can see that in your words. my pleasure, this one was exceptional
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Yess u right it eat u from the inside out !!
Thank you again ♥️
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Bacteria!!! Nice use of this word…
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Yesss Ameet ❤️
Is this love bacteria harmful than normal bacteria ?
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Not at all… U know some are harmful some are useful… love bacteria can never be harmful… it will teach u the best lessons of life
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Cooool
Everyone has their different views on dis delicate topic !!
Hope ur Sunday is going good !!
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Yeah Sunday – Shopping Day… hectic then others day
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Hahaha great !!
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Nooo…. she will cure herself of the bacteria and will lead a beautiful life!!!
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Let’s see if ur words turn true , coz she is done !!
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Oh wow..
Interesting Bacteria can be like this..!
Nice one. 👌👌
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Yess i tried this kind of bacteria , love bacteria 😉
Glad u enjoyed reading about bacteria !!
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yeah!!! I really enjoy reading it..
apericiate and respect your thoughts..
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Great to hear that from Beautiful soul like u dear 🌹
Stay blessed and enjoy !!
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🙏
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Wow… I got attracted by the topic because I have a friend of me with the same name! 🤣
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Hehehe what really ???. His/her name bacteria 😂😂😂😂😂
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Yeah! I gave him this name!
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Great 😁
Have a great time with Bacteria 😉😝
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🤣
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Well expressed Nirant…👍
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Thank you Anamika ❤️
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🙂
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This is so touching!
Beautifully felt pain 💖
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Yess it is dear !!
Thank you for stopping by and appreciating mi work ☺️
Means a lot to me for mi future writings 🎀
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This is something new, Bacteria…. Very nice💝👍
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Yess tried to relate it with love
Love bacteria
Thank you ma’am 😊
Glad u liked it !!
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You’re always welcome dear 💝😇🙏🏻
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☺️☺️
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Very well written. Hope it isn’t communicable!
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Thank you dear
Means a lot to me !!
Well likewise 😉
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Sure😄
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😁
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Such a heartfelt poem, Nirant. Powerful words. 😊
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Yess Winnie 🌹
Hope u two hands away from dis disease 😉
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Yes, Nirant! 😃 I don’t want to be contaminated with it. 😉
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Cooool
Stay safe & happy ☺️
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You too 😊
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Nirant your poems have such a depth of feelings! Wow! 💟
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Aww dear
I’m really wai8 for ur words to come on my blog coz ur words just pump me up to write more & more with deep meaning ♥️♥️
A big thank you for ur constant support !!
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My absolute pleasure 🤗💟
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🤗🤗♥️
Have a lovely day ahead !!
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You too 😘
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💕
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Beautiful use of words. The pain can be felt through your words.
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Thank you sohanpreet 🌹
Yesss Ink bleed wen this words came down on paper !!
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That’s so tragic!
But it’s written very elegantly. Keep it up
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Yeah Abhishek it’s tragic & most if us have gone through dis phase ?
Glad u enjoyed reading mi work ☺️
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Pleasure always
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☺️
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Reblogged this on The Shubham Stories.
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Thank you shubham for your sweet Gesture 🤝
Means a lot to me ♥️
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My Pleasure ❤
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☺️☺️
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Oh, this hurts so bad. 😔
You write reallly well, and I’m so happy to see you bring new concepts into your poems, like this biology one, hehe.
Keep going ji. 👦 And I’ll bring you one mask, stay away from this love-bacteria. 😹
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Yess partner it’s bad disease !!
Well yeah just tried to relate it with disease coz I think love is a disease only 😷?
Sure ji, great get me that mask so I can stay away from all disease
Hygenic boi in the town 👦♂️
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It sure is, Partner. 😼
Haan haan, hygienic boy toh ho hi, but you go on spreading this bacteria unknowingly. So full of love you are huh. 😂🤓
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Hihihihi 🤭🤭🤭
Well get me that mask soon huh 😾
I can’t breathe
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Huh, are you sure? That mask is permanent. And you won’t be able to feel love once it’s on your head. 😹 Never everrr, no love. Chalega?
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Whattttttttttt 😮😮😮😮 permanent🙉
Oh dear
Den get me that mask ri8 now ,coz u know ,it’s all about …
Me myself and I,solo ride until I die 🙃
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Yesss, I know everything.
Solo drive huh? What if a stranger girl asks for a lift along the way? What will you do? 🤔😹
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Well I’ll give her a lift coz humanity matters ,but just till her destination !! Nothing more 🤭😉
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Huh, fine. The test is complete fir. Ye lo mask. 👺
Nobody’s going to talk to you with love, starting from now. Have funnn. 😺
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Hawwww dat mask look so hard , gharmi hojayegi agar Yee pehnunga tohhhh ,I’ll get boils on mi face too🙇
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That’s the fun part naa Partnerrr. Go for it, ab toh you can’t back out. 😹😹
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Okay dokay 😾
I’m wearing it
See 👺 I’ve !!
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Woahh, so disgusting!! 😃 It’s working already. I am starting to hate you. 😺
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Great
I’m feeling relaxed now 😍
Thank you so much dear !!
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Anything for Partner. 😼♥
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Awww
Tenkuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 🧡 💙
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😼🧡💙
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😂😂
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Yes, I can see that this disease is rank and thanks for letting us know. Yet she is a very bad spot Nirant !!
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Yess Gentlemen , u got it right !!
Thank you for your kind words ☺️
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You are very welcome Nirant. Glad to have gotten it right my friend !
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🤝🤝
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Ah! This hurts Nirant! Tragic but very true!
P.S You are among the first 3 to visit my blog every time i post something. Missed your visit yesterday and wondered why?
Hope all is well with you?
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Yess it’s tragic and it hurts no matter what !!
Happy that u got mi words dear !!
Thank you so much !!
Sorry I’m running behind and missed some if the post ,
I’ve read it and I loved blank pages !!
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Thank you …And did I mention that you somehow seem to GET what a girl/woman goes through in a bad relationship. Its a rare thing…to be able to put yourself in someone else’s shoes and write their side of the story. It can only be God’s Grace that you have this amazing blessing!! May His grace continue to be showered on you …and may you keep creating such BEAUTIFUL words…Touchwood!
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Yesss I just try to understand who is going through which mood & condition !! Yeah I like to keep myself in front of me & think !!
Really happy that u noticed it 🌹
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Deep one bro 🙌❤️
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Yess coz dis diseases is damn dangerous !!
Glad u enjoyed mi work ☺️
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I love your pseudonym lolol
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What a use of words….
Well done bruh👍👍👍👍👍
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Hope u don’t get affected by dis disease 😉
Thank you for stopping by and appreciating mi work ♥️
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I will try my best to stay away
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Coool bruh 🤝
Have a lovely Sunday ahead !!
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Same to you bruh
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Excellent post! I remember feeling like that once upon a time…
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Yesss we all have experience this kind of feeling once !!
Thank you Jessy for ur kind words♥️
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Ugh… Some times more thank once.
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Yeah actually !!
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😥 six. Why do people do this to us?
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I don’t know, but it gets better! Hugs!
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Awwg; feels. Feels that are also feeling nice to relate you and get comforted for in turn! 🙂 🤗
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🤗☺️
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Coz we have feelings !!
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Yes, they’re so important
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Never thought of the word Bacteria in this way .
Amazing ! Liked it . Well done 👍
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Yess it’s Bacteria of love ☺️
Glad u liked it Sanika 🌹
Thank you so much !!
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My pleasure ✌️
Keep writing such an amazing pieces for us!!
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Sure sure I’ll
Just keep supporting like dis 💯 Everytime !!
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Yess sure !
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☺️☺️
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